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i love it. your words flow beautifully, like a song. the spcing is good and i looooove the title. You seem to be a natural at poetry. i will look ...

i love this so much. exspecially the last line. very touching and the words just flow. you have talent for sure. And i also really liked the name < 3 ...

wow. nice work. i know that fell bro/sistah. i like the egining the most, and i think you meant to say "I tried to be your man." Instead of "I ...

hey ToBeMe. you did a great job (great name btw:) i can realte to the feeling of being sad and alone which is greatly convated here, and also not quite ...

Great pice of writing. first off, i really do love how the end is so abrupt. i also amire how you evenly include thoughts, feeling, actions and descriptions. i also ...

i do have to sa that the word choices are unexpected, but i personally thnk its all part of the style of the pice. i sometimes use vauge words in ...

Dude this is one loooong short story. but a really good one too. i really felt drawn in by the set up. Like: short narrative bit. FLASHBACK it really drew ...

Ah i love the name black rose. i liked the stor alot and there is really nothing to critisize. if it was a book at a book store i would ...

hey klara. i was interested by the story right away. it somehow sucked me in and i could not stop reading it. it was amazing. i read it twice lol. ...

aw man. at first i was thinking "hey this reminds me of my best friend." untill you talked about turning on the tv. i suddenly expected the end. i had ...

wow. this is beautifully imperfect. i love how it seems kind a broken up and how the "no." is alone and sepperated. it seems trong and alone. but thats just ...

wow. this is overall great. i love your voice view and subject. how ever the couplets made it strange for me to read. but thats just me. every reader is ...

um... haha i will write you a real review xP it was good overall. a little confusing to me, as it seems to be a little choppy in plot. but ...

i love it. i really really do. dance is my first passion. writing my second. i often combine the two. you have done so well. i love the poetry. i ...

hah i love the elephant picture. and i love the story too. you write in a way that i wish i could. using great detail and beautifull sentences. i als ...