crewgurl93

Thank you for your advice. I took it very seriously. As for it being a lot like Twilight, I have on thing to say- Liam is NOT a vampire. I ...

Peace, love, and blessed be. I thank you for your reviews.

Huh? Sorry but I don't quite get it...

Sorry for the length... the main reason it's so long was to make my teacher either really mad or really impressed... and also because it definatly requires more than five ...

I like it. I think the only bad part to me was the first stanza. Yeah, it really didn't do much for me. But other wise, this poem was lovely. ...

I mean, it really sucks! Dang...

God. Why did I write this crap again???

I love it!!! I love it!!! I love it!!! Such emotion!

Cool... weird, but cool :) Peace

This poem is about me and how I feel some people see me. I wrote it while I was doing crew (rowing), because I felt like I didn't belong there. ...

You started pretty good. Basically everybody already said what I was going to say. Finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Um... the begining is what caught me. That's good! But the ending... let me put it this way- It. Was. Sad. Keep trying and improve.

I like this. I may try something like that! PEACE

Well, I did go out in a thunderstorm. I was going to take a metal rod, but decieded not to be that stupid. I wrote this right before I actually ...

Cool! I like Vampire stuff! I didn't really see anything, except your rymes were off sometimes. LUV crewgurl