crescent

This was hilarious. xP

even if its in secret *it's I'm not but of a poetry person, but I find the idea quite interesting and I liked how "Forget Me Not" was constantly repeated. ...

xP Well spoken.

I like the ending. xP This made my day. -Cressy

Lol. This was a cute story. How old is your little brother? He has lots of potential. All he needs to do is add some more detail and who knows? ...

This is good. The title drew me in and the poem was amazing. Everyone else already pretty much covered all the grammar stuff. I don't really grasp the meaning of ...

I liked it. It was brilliant. Clever. And it had a unique twist to it that I totally wasn't expecting.

Henri got lost now too? Poor Henri wandering around. This is really good. :) I want more now. You better post more soon!!! ...or I'll be a sad panda.

Wow. I really like this chapter. It's nice. The dialogue is a bit hard to follow though. Sometimes you talk about another chracter's actions when a different chracter is speaking, ...

Lol. :P

:) RHYMES!!!! :) This was sweet. Good work Elfy!!! -Cressy

I can feel tears coming...

:) Good job Elfy!!! It was really pretty. :)

:) Bells :)

xP You did it! :)