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Well, that was unexpected. I like how you created something totally new and the whole "don't trip" idea. I thought they were like barbies at first. Lol. You proved me ...

EEEP! :) This was so pretty, JD!!!!! I'm sorry that happened though... It's nice how it's not all cliche-y though. :) :) :) *likes* -Cressy

Hey Matt ^_^ ! I like the idea for this short story. There a just a few typos (ig you spell "off" as "of" a couple of times and you ...

:) It just keeps getting better!!! I can't wait for the next chapter Razzi!!! Thank you for not killing people... yet. ;) Lol. You put the title and the story ...

and I didn't believe just who I seen, and I didn't believe just who I'd seen my heart will never poor, It should be "pour". I don't really know how ...

:'( Why did Mark have to die? Couldn't she have held on him, refusing to let him go and shoved him in the elevator so he couldn't go kill himself? ...

I'd suggest that you describe Snape and Katherine's love more. What was it like? When was this, because I thought Snape loved Lily... You may want to build on the ...

*Nods in agreement to Shade*. I'm glad you decided to continue with this, but I agree that some of the things aren't as real as the first part. In the ...

:( YWS said I wasn't logged in and so my review got lost. AM, this was really intriguing. At first, I didn't want to read the whole thing because it ...

Hey Jagged. It was an interesting poem. It flowed very nicely and the imagery was nice. It's talking about a girl with bird tattoos right, a special someone for someone? ...

Hey NinjaCookieMonster. I haven't read the first two chapters so I don't really understand what's going on besides the fact that their school is awesome and the main character has ...

Hey Gladius. EEEP!!! O.o I think I reviewed a comment by accident... I'll take a look at it again later. (Don't know much about Legend of Zelda except that it's ...

Hey. I like the title to your poem. There was a contradiction. You said that the man was there with you in bed, but then all of the sudden you ...

Hey. *tear drops from eye* What happened that made Zane suddenly dump her after a two year relationship? Loveless, please reveal his secret or whatever. She just smiled is all, ...

I like it. You did a good job with it. It sounds believable, like the chracter's real, as if all of this really happened. It's pretty. Maybe you should do ...