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Re: I am the Invisible
What a lovely expresses the loneliness of not being noticed,yet,not knowing how to break it,because it’s so easy to live by favorite parts were these lines:”Because I am a ghost ...
Sep 20, 2021 -
Re: All-American (Witch) Girl:Two
I don’t know if you remember me,but I commented on your last story about Minnie.I’m liking this story about the witch girl so far and I’m excited to see it ...
Sep 19, 2021 -
Re: benevolence
Lovely poem.I love it the message that you are giving us,that maybe the god (or gods) are showing kindness to us by giving us the simplest things in life,like trees ...
Sep 15, 2021 -
Re: The misadventures of a man named Lucifer.
The Mother is Moira and the vampire is Mark.Lucifer is a human,but he has gross powers.He can vomit acid.Moira is a witch.Mark is a vampire,but he wasn%u2019t always one.Thanks for ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: An Odyssey of Love
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Sep 13, 2021
What a beautiful poem! Your description beautifully explains perfectly the meaning of love and how it can change us for the favorite lines were these last ones:”The water was honey,sugar ... -
Re: An Odyssey of Love
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Sep 13, 2021
What a beautiful poem! Your description beautifully explains perfectly the meaning of love and how it can change us for the favorite lines were these last ones:”The water was honey,sugar ... -
Re: An Odyssey of Love
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Sep 13, 2021
What a beautiful poem! Your description beautifully explains perfectly the meaning of love and how it can change us for the favorite lines were these last ones:”The water was honey,sugar ... -
Re: An Odyssey of Love
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Sep 13, 2021
What a beautiful poem! Your description beautifully explains perfectly the meaning of love and how it can change us for the favorite lines were these last ones:”The water was honey,sugar ... -
Re: An Odyssey of Love
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Sep 13, 2021
What a beautiful poem! Your description beautifully explains perfectly the meaning of love and how it can change us for the favorite lines were these last ones:”The water was honey,sugar ... -
Re: The Father-A deathly,evil,soul-stealing entity.
Thanks for your review!
Sep 13, 2021 -
Re: A Tisket, A Tasket
Okay,thanks.
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: Clowns, magic, murder and lies.
Thanks for reading my work.
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: Eloise-The demented doll woman
I added a backstory for Katlin in this story! You can read it if you want.
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: the texture of flower petals
What an interesting story! I love the lesson it teaches us,the readers.You can leave behind your broken past and work to make a better future for yourself and the people ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: The mystical book of poems-Seasons and Halloween poems made by me.
Thanks for you review! I fixed the %u201CDemon and their secrets%u201D poem and made sure claws wasn%u2019t repeated twice.
Sep 6, 2021