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Hello there!! First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS. I hope you like it as much as I do! If you've got any questions, ask away; I'm fairly ...

Hello there!! :) First off, as soon as I saw the title of your poem, I wanted to read it. I've been sort of obsessed with writing about autumn lately, ...

Hello there!!! First off, I like the the style of your writing. It's clean but it still makes me imagine what you're writing about, which is a good thing. I'm ...

Hello there!! :) Well, now, this poem made me laugh. I'm sorry, it did. I'm not sure if it was meant to, but it did. As soon as I read ...

Hey!! This is an awesome piece of work. The imagery you used is breathtaking...while I read it I found myself drifting off into my mind imagining what you were describing. ...

Hello there!! I like this poem. It's simple, but you still embellished it with details that made the story you were telling come to life. You pillaged and burned after ...

Hello!! This is a nice little poem. It's very simple; in fact, that's the thing I like best about it. Still, you managed to slip in some details about your ...

Hey! This is an interesting story. I like the overall feeling of it; it's casual and not overly wordy. I walked through the door of my home. Soaked wet. And ...

Hey!!! This poem is interesting. I know how it is to be inspired by something to the point of not being able to get it out of your head except ...

Hey! First off, this is an awesome poem. I love the way it tells a story but tells me about the emotions of the writer as well. It really drew ...

Hey! This is an awesome poem! The clothing that you wear Even the color of your hair I've never seen perfection Walk the grass like you And being that we ...

Hey Elinor! First off, I think this story has a lot of potential. There are some elements of it that I really like, but there are others that I don't ...

Hi! First off, I like this piece. One of the reasons I like it is because it's a little unrefined, a little rough around the edges, and I think that ...

Hi! This poem was really sad, but it was done well. I like the way you kept it simple because it was a little kid who was telling the story. ...

This poem is so beautiful. It's the only poem I've read in a while that's almost made me cry. Even before I read the spoiler I sensed that there was ...