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I scream and shout, these chains wont slip? Does that sound good? by the way, thanks for the help.

Dude. I absolutely loved it. I love the chill it sent. It was fantastic. I have no corrections, I didn't see where they could be any. Awesome job, keep it ...

I think it's great. Took me a little while to catch on. I'm a little slow at times, haha. But I loved it. Keep writing, because you got talent man. ...

I agree, I really like the poem, but you do need more punctuation. Other than that I really have no complaints. Keep writing, You're very talented. Sincerely, Ciara

That what was supposed to be way in the first sentence. Oops.

Thank you. :) Sincerely, Ciara

Thank you. I i have picked over a little since I put it on here. I'll put the revised version on once I get on a computer and off my ...

I absolutely adore it! I think it flowed very well and it was short but sweet. Nicely done, I have no more comments for this other than that it was ...

I really liked it, but to me it seemed choppy. I'm could be all the commas, idk, maybe I'm just weird. Sincerely, Ciara

I absolutely adore it and have no changes other than the last two lines. I don't understand how they fit. But keep it up! I loved it. Sincerely, Ciara

Yeah I agree. It seemed like you didn't try.

I absolutely love it. You are a great writer. Keep it up!

Thank you. It means a lot to me. :)

Did you intend for it to be that format? I would suggest a different one, but only because that's my own personal preference. But other than that I liked it. ...

I agree with everyone else, I have no problems with it. I absolutely loved it. No corrections, :) Nicely done! Sincerely, Ciara