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Hello emmaki. I quite enjoyed your prologue. You did a very good job with the transaction from the young girl playing in the wild to the introduction of the forest ...

Hello again ChocolateCello. So this a complete different turn from what we got on the first chapter, and I don't mean it in a bad way. I'm just saying that ...

Hello ChocolateCello, First I have to say I love your tittle, it was actually what made me come here so when you say you'll probably change the tittle I'm hoping ...

Hello bluecat, Even tought a bit small I do find your begining intriguing as I get vibes from Harry Potter and of course I am a huge fan. Now to ...

Hello Mloomps, First of welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. Moving to the story, I must be frank and say you do need to work on a ...

Hello dracowave, Humm... I feel like you are going to have a LOT of work trying to shape all this in a story because it is very visual, with all ...

Hello ButterflyWriter235, First of all welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here :D So, I can see you are a fan of anime/manga right? There is a anime ...

Hello again :D So, I take back what I said in the last review about the background on the watches because you do mention here her Grandfather and how he ...

Hello wridingislife, I said I would come and here I am! :D I liked this first chapter very much, your idea to make the watches work by fear is very ...

Hello AsYetUntitled, I must say this is a rather morbid yet funny story and I find it very enjoyable. I applause to your creativity because you were able to write ...

Hello hermione315, You wrote a rather unusual story and I found myself liking it. Not only did you used a dog as a narrator which is an interesting and not ...

Hello blablabl92, Even though it is a small poem I really like it and I think most people will too because as fellow writers who hasn't had their amount of ...

Hello IDontKnowMaybeSo, I enjoyed your poem very much, it is very sentimental and the fact that you humanized the songbird gives it a fresh prespective. I don't know if you ...

Helo AlyssaB506, I'm certainly intrigued with this Follower of yours! First I tought it would be this horrendous looking thing as you made it out to be in the begining ...

Hello felistia, Your poem is a delight to read, it is beautifully written and yet it shows all the power and strenght of such a mighty creature like dragons. I ...