Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language and violence.
This is my story called the Seven Heavenly Kings. It's about a man named Ace and six other gods along with seven Demon gods from a parallel dimension who all become humans. on a quest to become gods or at least that's kinda how i want the story to go anyway.
This is just a first draft; I have more but during the later chapters i use a completely different writing style so i want to see if this is acceptable so far. I'm going to change most of the dialogue as well.
This is the first six chapters
The Seven Heavenly Kings
Prologue
What is a god or a goddess? They are just existences that create the systems that lower organisms become the cogs for. But why do they truly exist? Are they there to watch over us? Guide and protect us? Or to usurp us and control our every action and treat us like puppets in a play or characters in a game? No one knows the true meaning of their existence not even the gods themselves. All they know is that they came into existence with a power far beyond all others and how they use that power is up to them.
Out in universe number 79, two gods are battling fiercely to decide who’s the stronger of the two. On one side, we have The God of Oblivion (Ace) versus The God of Creation (Raynard Ventus). Otherwise known as Raven
Chapter1: Battle of The Gods
Ace: Well then, let’s get started Raven. Time for me to show you why I’m the best.
Raynard: Our last battle was quite interesting, but this time there will be no draws. I’ll show you how strong I’ve become!
Both gods disappear in an instant. This causes the universe they inhabit, along with several hundreds of universes in conjunction, to explode from the sheer force of their acceleration. In another instant they cause ripples in space time. As they distort space with each clash, thousands of universes have been erased from existence. They stop and bask in the distortion of worlds. In the distance, the gods of Radiance (Rika), Gravity (Axel), Knowledge (Akira) and Energy (Ionius) watch in awe as the very fabric of time and space, along with millions of universes, are being destroyed every couple of minutes. All this while, the Goddess of balance (Kira) reads a book in the middle of the conflict seeming completely unfazed by the fighting.
Rika: The fight has only just started and millions of universes have been destroyed by now how much destruction are they planning to cause before they are satisfied?!
Ionius: This is getting out of hand these bastards are destroying everything we should stop them before we get caught in the middle of it!!
Akira: Don’t be stupid Kira is the only one that can handle them we would just get decimated trying to even come close to their clashes we should just try to escape although soon there won’t be anywhere to escape to.
Axel: Kira!!!!! You have to stop them you are the only one strong enough to do it.
Kira: Just shut up you idiots are overreacting after this fight they will just recreate everything they destroyed anyway boys will be boys let’s just let this all play out (she says as she nonchalantly reads her book with an annoyed expression on her face clearly angry about being distracted from reading).
As the fight continues the clashes only get fiercer and flashier as Raynard starts to use his powers as he shoots a blast small enough to fit in the hand but its force was enough to destroy the world many times over as he unleashes it along with that attack many white spears of light follow swiftly behind it imitating several snakes attacking their prey. Ace gracefully and skillfully dodges the blast along with the spears of light or at least he thinks he is as the spears of light hone onto him he tries to escape but they are too fast and they penetrate him in several different areas... he then uses his oblivions gate to reverse the effects of the attack and any remnants of the spears and his injuries were completely gone as if they never existed.
Ace: That was a nice attack it kind of hurt but maybe you should try hitting me next time
Raynard: I did hit you you bastard you just erased it
Ace: I hear what you’re saying but you can’t prove you hit me without any injuries to show for it.
(Ace utilizes his wit and eggs on Raynard as he heightens his anger to its peak causing Raynard to start attacking in a frenzy but each blast he shot had less and less accuracy this slip up gave Ace the chance to attack as he shot out one of his attacks at full force).
Ace: oblivion sphere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(He shouts as an orb filled with positive and negative energy shoots swiftly through the air. Everything around him starts to distort and everything fades to black as an existential rift is summoned that causes all existence around the sphere to be completely and utterly erased as it whirs through space all in its path is erased as it moves at a speed far faster than anyone can comprehend as it hits its mark Raynard is severely injured and dazed which Ace takes advantage of as he goes in for the attack. But he is then interrupted by a bright white dragon that tackles him through several planets as he is slammed into a faraway galaxy).
Raynard: That was a strong attack but this is far from over. If you think for even one second you can beat me, you are out your mind (he speaks in a dark irritated tone and its clear to see that he is at his last stand while ace is far from tired).
Ace: What’s wrong Raven you’re slowing down your going to have to try harder than that if you want to beat me ... good try though you’ve really improved although your still nowhere near my level. I’ll take everything you have and dish it back at you full force.
They clash again causing more destruction and causing cracks in the fabric of their dimension. And out of the cracks leaks a darkness that corrupts all.
Chapter 2: Arrival of The End
Somewhere off in the distance a dimensional rift opens from the cracks and out from the rift comes a figure with dark and devilish green eyes, a full golden armor and wings that glimmer with twilight. Out from the rift comes one of the seven hellish demons (Raynare the Demon God of Cosmos).
Raynare: Where am I could this be another world? Oh what is this? Two gods are fighting each other. Hey that god looks just like me; could this be an alternate dimension? No that’s impossible there’s no such thing as alternate dimensions. But there’s no other way I could describe it. Tchh! It can’t be that’s Aion but I killed him! But if he is alive then that means that this must really be new dimension, very interesting I wonder what I’ll be able to find here? While I’m here I might as well start become the ruler of this world as well and I’ll start by getting rid of anyone who can stop me. Sorry about this but I’ll be taking over your mind for a little bit.
Raynare: Demonic sovereignty (A jet black but transparent beam with dark swirling particles is shot of the wings on Raynare’s back and they hit Raynard directly causing Raynard’s mind to be corrupted.
Raynard: Ahhhh what is this my mind is being… Who? WHO ARE YOU WHAT IS GOING ON?
Raynare: I’m your inner consciousness you will do as my command your job is to kill that bastard do you whatever it takes even if you have to destroy everything in the process.
Raynard: GET THE HELL OUT OF MY HEAD I WONT LISTEN TO YOU!!!!
Raynare: YOU HAVE NO CHOICE!!
Ace: You alright Raven you look a little out of it we could stop if you need time to rest I know I’m completely amazing and in comparison you may feel obsolete but I’m sure tha…
Raynard: Shut up Shut up Shut the hell up!!!!! I’m sick of your bullshit you bastard you think this is a game I will destroy you!! Creation Reign Final Act: Judgement Wheel haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!! (Billions of tiny light spheres form around Raynard. They start to form a large wheel that radiates an effervescent light that illuminates all in its path the light is so intense that it blinds any and all who look at it. The light causes several billions of universes to be completely engulfed and leaves a trail of white with nothing else in its path as the spheres combine to form a single large and intense sphere of light).
Raynard: This is my strongest attack you won’t be able to erase this one you will die there is no other answer.
Ace:
Hey Raven what the hell is wrong with you that attack is too powerful
you’ll hit the others too.
Raynard: JUST HURRY UP AND DIE!!!
Ace: Shit that’s a lot of energy if I don’t block this attack I’m finished (Ace says in a panicked tone as his face is filled with worry he then uses his strongest attack to counterattack).
Ace: Let’s see if you can handle this Oblivion Arts: Chaotic Desolation!!! (Several dimensional gates are summoned and they release causing several dark beams to be shot out and they start to distort space and cause cracks in reality as billions of universes are removed from existence the dark beams come together to form a single long and sharp beam).
The dark beam and light sphere collide with each other. The speed and force from which they collide causes space and time to be completely and utterly decimated every universe in existence along with the very fabric of space and time is simultaneously obliterated as all of existence starts to fade to black and white.
Somewhere off in the distance a crack can be heard as a dimensional rift opens and out from the rift comes a figure with devilish golden eyes a full golden armor and wings that glimmer with twilight. Out from the rift comes one of the seven hellish demons (Raynare the demon of destruction).
Raynare: Where am I could this be? A new dimension, very interesting I wonder what I’ll be able to find here?
Both THIS IS THE END HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
All of the Gods are completely and utterly flabbergasted at the vast destruction that has been created from a simple sparring match.
Rika: OH MY GOD I Can’t BELIEVE THIS THEY HAVE DESTROYED EVERYTHING THERES NOTHING LEFT IS THIS REALLY THE END!!!! (The other gods aside from Kira are completely speechless and have no comments that can describe their awe)
Kira: This is a pretty good book I wonder what the ending will be (Kira is still completely entranced in her book she has reached the final page as she acts as though nothing has happened. She is so entranced that she fails to realize that the clashing attacks have created small cracks in her barrier).
Kira: Finally, the last pa.... (As she is speaking a beam hits her book and completely destroys it. As this happens her eyes grow dark and she starts to emit an intense black and red aura. The aura is so intense that all of the explosions and force emitted from the destruction seemed to be quieted at once. Everyone that felt the aura immediately went silent for fear of an imminent death that was comparable to a deer being caught in a trap with a lion fast approaching).
All: Uh oh
Kira: ... SON OF A BITCH YOU BASTARDS WITH ALL THIS FUCKING FIGHTING DESTROYED MY FUCKING BOOK IM GONNA KILL YOU I WAS ON THE LAST PAGE NOW ILL NEVER BE ABLE TO SEE THE ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Through the loud clashes and bursts of energy a single light pierces through at unconceivable speeds and lands a powerful hit on both fighters causing them to be sent flying across the now empty dimension. The attack causes Raynare’s control over Raynard to be disconnected but the seeds have already been sown.
Raynare: what is this power she can’t possibly be strong enough to disrupt my control who is this woman is she a god too and it seems she’s equal in strength to the those two.
As his plan has failed Raynare returns to his own dimension to plot again. The dimensional rift is still present but the others haven’t seemed to notice.
Kira: Give me one reason why I shouldn’t murder you bastards.
Ace: We didn’t mean to (Ace barely manages to dodge as Kira throws a flurry of punches in his direction. He is still worn out from his fight with Raven so he gets hit several times and soon he is in an apologetic state.
Raven: My mind is clear again who the hell was that inner consciousness my ass. Ahhh! (As he is thinking to himself a blast of energy hits him directly in the chest and knocks him faraway.
Both: But he started the fight. (they both point at each other with accusatory fingers
Kira: No excuses just accept your punishment.
Both: Were sorry we didn’t mean to.
Akira: calm down I can just bring back your book if you like. (as she says this Kira’s anger subsides as she is now calm).
Kira: Can you really do that little sister (Kira looks at her with sweet and childish eyes that completely contrasts her previous state of mind.
Akira: I’m the god of knowledge for a reason I can create as many books as you want me to as long as you don’t go on another rampage.
Kira: Thank you thank you thank you. (she starts jumping around happily like a little girl with a new doll.
All but Kira and Akira: Wow she changed her demeanor fast. (They all sigh and start to laugh out loud. The fighting ends and all of the previous tension is completely gone and replaced with nonchalant chatter.
Chapter 3: The Possibility of Humanity
All of the gods observe the now desolate dimension that was laid to waste by the fight.
Ace: Boy we really did a number on the world huh?
Everyone:
YOU THINK.
Rika: Why the hell were you two fighting anyway?
Ace and Raven: Uhhhhhh.
Everyone: UHH WHAT WHATS THE REASON?
Ace: You wanna tell them Raven?
Raven: nope that’s all you I think you’re the best person for the job.
Everyone: WELL?
Ace: Well we were bored so we decided to fight to occupy our time. (As he finishes talking everyone is completely speechless with but their faces turn from speechless to rage.
Rika: you destroyed all of existence and nearly killed us because you were bored. (The others all look on with anger as they all aim their attacks at the two gods).
Kira let’s just kill these Idiots.
Both: c’mon guys let’s just talk this out
Rika and Akira: I agree.
Both: Pheew.
Rika and Akira: we should just kill these idiots.
Both: Ahhhhhhh (Both gods look at each other nod their heads and then attempt to escape but they are circled around before they can move.
7 Hours Later
Ace: Boy they did a number on us huh?
Raven: Dammit they could have gone easy on us we had just finished fighting too.
Kira and Rika: You two deserved it for being dumbasses. (Worried that he will receive more punishment Raven runs away.
Kira and Rika: GET BACK HERE! Kira stay here I’ll go chase after him Got it (Rika chases after Raven leaving Kira and Ace alone.
Ace: Kira I’m really sincerely sorry about what we did it’s just so boring. I mean we are gods we have all of the power in the world so why is it that we live in a world that doesn’t even need gods. DAMMIT we might as well not even exist if there is nothing for us to do.
Kira:
I forgive you guys and I understand your grievances but there’s
nothing we can do about it we came into existence as gods and it will
stay that way no matter what we do. Although I do sometimes wish I
could become a human.
Ace: ……. (Ace’s face
turns to an intense and focused expression
Kira: What’s up what’s that intense expression for are you okay?
Ace: What if we could become human?
Kira: Uhhhh well I would be happy but once again we can’t huh (Ace jumps up and walks closer and closer to Kira until they are only a few inches apart.
Kira: What are you doing? Why are you so close?
Ace:
You say we can’t become humans but we haven’t even
tried
Kira: That’s preposterous we. (She starts to ponder
the possibility). But wouldn’t that be messing with powers we
don’t have any control over?
Ace: we’ve already destroyed everything in the world what’s messing with our own existence going to change. Just think about we could discover a whole new world we may even be able to discover our origins, don’t you want to find out why we exist? At least consider it I’ll talk about it with the others.
Kira: … I don’t know what to do I… just give me some time to think about. I’ll give you my answer soon.
2 Hours Later
As time passes Ace Raven and Kira use their abilities to rebirth existence. Ace uses his power to gather all of the nothingness that inhabits the world, Kira uses his power to give shape and form to all of the nothingness and Raven takes all the shapes and uses them to create planets, solar systems, galaxies, universes and the organisms that inhabit them and with that all of existence is returned to its original state. After this Ace explains his idea to the others and doesn’t receive the response he expected.
Ace: Well what do you guys think? (Everyone aside from Kira and Akira are completely speechless they look at Ace as if he were speaking in an alien tongue)
Rika: Are you crazy you really think we can become humans we were created as gods for a reason becoming human is out of the question.
Ionius: She’s right who knows what’ll happen to us if we become humans.
Axel: Not to mention that we don’t know of any ways to properly become human anyway that’s not how our existence works we can’t just change it.
Akira: Well Now that you mention it one of the books I acquired from my travels of our Omni verse I found a very interesting book about magic that works to alter existences. If we use that we may have an answer. I say it’s worth a shot.
Raven: What the hell is wrong with you two do you not understand the severity of what you’re planning becoming human you two must be out of your damn minds. Especially you Akira I Know that Ace is a complete dumbass but I at least expected better from you.
Ace: Hey who are you calling a dumbass, dumbass.
Raven: SHUT IT ACE we all have disagreed to it that’s five votes against two this talk is over.
Ace: What do you mean five Kira still hasn’t spoken yet Kira what is your decision.
Raven We already know that she wouldn’t want to join in on such a foolish and crazy plan right Kira. (While he is talking Kira makes a determined face and she walks into the center of the room.
Kira: … First I just want to say that this plan is incredibly stupid and crazy.
Raven: See that Ace I told you she wou...
Kira: I’m not done yet I think this plan is stupid and crazy but I want to go through with it. We have existed for trillions of years and in these trillions of years we have existed we have done nearly everything we fought interplanetary wars with aliens we have created other gods, clones of ourselves, destroyed an infinite number of universes on multiple occasions and many more things but after all of that there is nothing left for us to do but sit around and talk about nothing read books and fight each other. It’s always going to be this way we are all bored and we are all unhappy with the way we have to live. If we truly have to continue to living this way, we might as well just erase ourselves from existence and live in the nothingness where the concept of boredom doesn’t exist. I just want a change of tired of the same old same old I just want it all to end. (As she speaks she went from talking to screaming and now her eyes are red from the amount of tears that she is dropping).
Everyone looks at Kira in awe as they all start to shed tears as they realize that she is right and they have always felt the same way deep down in their souls, everyone except for Ace and Raven Ace looks on in shock as the intelligent, reserved, serious and powerful Woman he thought he completely knew had fallen to her knees and was shedding tears like a child. He had no answer or comments to give all he could do was stare blankly.
Akira, Axel, Rika, and Ionius: She’s right we want to change too if there is any chance that we can become humans we want to try it.
Raven: Are you all insane do you even hear yourselves this is ridiculous you idiots can all go do this by yourselves and face the consequences together.
While Raven looked on in disgust his mind at this point was nearly completely corrupted by Raynare’s mental attack he leaves the room after his outburst to be alone.
Ace: Seems like he is angry let’s give him some time to calm his mind.
Akira, Axel, Rika, and Ionius: Lets return here tomorrow and we can go through with your plans. (Axel and Ionius leave alone).
Rika and Akira: Ace take care of our sister for us It looks like she needs you right now.
Ace:
Got it I’ll take care of her you don’t have to worry.
(Ace returns to Kira and they talk in private).
Kira: … Why
are you looking at me like that?
Ace: Kira I need to tell you something before we decide to do this.
Kira: What is it.
Ace: Ever since we came into existence I have always admired you from the omniversal wars to the godly wars to the clone wars. Me and Raven are stronger than you but you have always been the strongest of the three of us. You have always been incredibly intelligent, hardworking, strong and serious. From the beginning you have been our guiding light you’ve always kept us focused and you have worked incredibly hard to help us survive and… (Ace inhales deeply and exhales as he looks at Kira with a determined face).
Ace: Well
Kira: What?
Ace I love you I always have loved you since the beginning. It’s always been you
Kira: Huh? WHA WH WHAAAAAAAAAT? ARE YOU SERIOUS? THAT CAN’T BE THE CASE!!
Ace: Funny huh I bet you never would have guessed it. It’s been that way for a while I’ve always wanted to tell you this but I never really knew how to say it. You are my spring of radiance that outshines every star in the solar system. You’re like a beautiful flower that has bloomed with a luminescent shine brighter than all of the flowers in the field. You are my angel, my guiding light that heals my spiritual and emotional wounds you’re everything to me and without you I would have probably had just destroyed this world or just ended my existence. (With all of his thoughts let out all of the tension and nervousness he felt was completely erased and he returned to his usual calm and collected state). Phew well I’ve said what I have to say now all I need is to hear how you feel.
Kira: I … (She is hesitant to speak as she tries to collect her thoughts her eyes gloss over with tears she finally gains the courage to answer with her heart in tow). I feel the same. I… I’ve loved you too since we had our first conversation I had always been so bored and disinterested in the world and its inhabitants. But then I talked to you I was actually quite angry that you came to talk to me but as our conversation continued I felt happier as time passed I started to become interested and eventually I started to fall for you. You brought light and warmth into this cold and dark world and without you I wouldn’t have been able to continue this pointless existence.
They have both expressed their feelings for each other now what comes next for the two lovers.
Chapter 4 The Demons Deceit
While Ace and Kira were confessing to each other Raven called for a meeting with the other gods.
Everyone: So Raven what is this about why did you call us together.
Raven: We need to stop Ace and his plan he has fooled you all.
Akira: Raven we have already agreed to the plan you’re the only one who has any opposition to it.
Rika:
She’s right and what do you mean he has fooled us he wouldn’t
do something like that.
Ionius: You’re just mad because
you’re the odd man out just give it up. We know that you’re
just angry that Ace is superior to you and every way.
Raven: Just shut up you idiots and let me finish. Listen This plan that he devised is a just a plot to take over and become our ruler.
Rika and Akira: That’s preposterous there is no way that Ace would do something like that We’ve known him for far too long for him to try and do something like that would be insane. And besides even Kira agrees with him you can try to discredit him but not our sister.
Raven: That’s just a part of his plan he’s trying to woo her into submission and she’s already falling for him. Is that not true. (As he says this everyone becomes silent as they know that this is true).
Raven: Now like I said we have to stop him if they were alone together then she’s most likely already under his control so we are going to have to fight her too. You may all be inferior to them but if we all fight together we can win.
Rika: I still can’t believe this there is no way that he would do that… but if that really is the case then we have no choice but to fight them.
Akira:
But she’s our sister and he’s our friend I don’t
want to fight them.
Raven: We can’t beat them without you
It’s up to you to decide We’ll execute the plan tomorrow.
(But first I will deal with Kira).
Raven goes off to go take care of Kira as the others gather their strength for the big fight. Kira and Ace are together building their relationship.
Raven:
Hey Ace do you mind if me and Kira talk in private.
Ace: Uhhhh
sure be my guest. (Raven and Kira leave and fly off into space.
Kira: So what is this about.
Raven: Kira you need to stay away from Ace he is up to no good.
Kira: what the hell are you talking about
Raven: I bet he confessed his “Love” to you yesterday didn’t he. He is trying to trick you into fighting together with him. He is trying to become the most powerful god and in order to do it he has to get rid of us. (As he is speaking his eyes gloss over and Kira notices a dark gleam in his eyes that exudes unbridled rage hatred and malice. She could tell that his mind was clouded as if he were under a trance and she knew that something was wrong).
Kira: Hey Raven what the hell is wrong with you. Wait why are you getting so close, AHH! (She narrowly dodges as a spear of light blasts past destroying a length of her hair. And knocking her back, she then catches her balance and tries to retaliate but is then attacked with a flurry of light spears that are all centimeters away from making contact. The light spears are turning dark and Raven’s aura has become pitch black and he is emitting waves of malice that sends chills down Kira’s spine).
Raven: JUST STOP RUNNING AND DIE I PROMISE TO MAKE IT PAINLESS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (Raven lets out a sadistic laugh that shows that his mind has faded to black).
Kira: STOP THIS AT ONCE WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO YOU. If you don’t stop, I will have no choice but to fight you back (Kira’s frustration is reaching its peak as she prepares an attack. She shoots it and it hits Raven right in the chest but he doesn’t budge an inch and now has a gaping hole in his chest. But his dark aura removes all remnants of the wounds and he now looks at Kira with the eyes of a madman.
Raven:
what’s wrong why are you hesitating fight me with everything
that you’ve got that’s the only way you will win. (He
shoots more spears this time hitting Kira’s legs and slowing
her down she attacks with a flurry of ice crystals they hit Raven but
once again they have minimal effect).
Kira: Dammit why is he so
strong.
Raven: Hahahaha So this is the power of darkness now I see why Ace is so strong that bastard was hiding all of this power for himself. I feel great I can feel the power surging through me. I AM REBOOOOORN. (He summons several dark dragons that attack Kira she tries to retaliate but she is too late and is slammed into a faraway planet. The planet is destroyed and she is knocked unconscious. At this point Raven’s consciousness and soul was completely erased by Raynare’s mind control and Raynare’s soul has inhabited his body).
Raynare: Now then that’s one nuisance out of the way. Now to deal with the other
Meanwhile Rika and Akira go after Ace who is waiting for Kira.
Ace: Boy they are taking a long time I wonder if I should check on them? What is this feeling? I can feel a dark aura descending. Huh? what was that it feels like someone fighting but that feels like… Kira’s life force is… fading I have to go. What the? (Rika and Akira enter the universe he is inhabiting)
Rika: Hey Ace how are you? What have you been up to? (Rika and Kira are hoping that what Raven said wasn’t true).
Kira:
Did you help Kira get over her problems.
Ace: Yeah actually I…
kind of confessed to her I figured since this may be the last time we
see each other I should tell her how I feel about her. (As he
finishes his sentence the misconceptions placed in their minds by
Raven had come into play. Listen I Just felt Kira’s aura fade
she must be fighting someone but who it can’t be Raven the aura
is too dark. (As he is speaking Rika and Kira circle around him and
question him).
Rika: It’s okay Kira is fine she’s just taking a nap. (Akira is now staring down Ace with a face full of tears. She is trying her best to feel anger towards him. Her brain say’s that Raven is right but her heart wants her to believe in Ace. She strengthens her resolve
Akira: Is it really true? Did you really trick our sister; trick us? I don’t want to believe it but there is every bit of evidence that say’s that it is true.
Ace: What the heck are you talking about Akira I would never trick you guys. We have been friends for billions of years what reason would I have to trick you?
Rika: Save your lies for someone else we already know what your plan is you were just using our sister. I WOOOOONT FORGIIIIIVE YOUUUUU!!! ABRAXIA I SUMMON THEE RAIN DOWN HOLY RETRIBUTION UPON THINE ENEMY! (Rika summons an angelic figure covered in a white garb with chains all around her and white wings and a halo garnishing her head. unleashes several white lights in the form of chains. The chains wrap around Ace and tighten to the point where they start to rip through his flesh.
Ace: Gaha! Dammit what are these chains made of. (Ace is surprised at the strength of the chains. The harder he struggles to escape the chains the tighter they become. As his struggle intensifies
Ace: Haaaaaaaaaaa FADE TO BLACK! (Ace calls out this technique then the chains around are consumed by a pitch black aura that causes the chains to slowly deteriorate). Damn that was close that would have probably been bad although it wouldn’t have done anything and I could just have easily erased it. (Rika is in awe as she realizes that one of her strongest attacks had no effect on him. It was at this moment she came to the understanding that the difference in not only their power but their skill is far too vast.
Rika: DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT that was one of my strongest attacks and he just brushed it off as if it were nothing. Akira we have to work together
Ace: Guys just stop this I don’t know what made you believe that I tricked you but I assure you that that’s not the case.
Akira: I’m sorry Ace but I can’t trust you anymore. Terraforming (Akira is still shaking with tears streaming down her face as she launches an attack. A large book forms in the vacuum of space and all of the page’s fuse together to form several giant earth golems that emit an electromagnetic aura). TAKE THIS!!!
Ace: Dammit!! WILL YOU JUST LISTEN TO ME urrrrrrraaaaa Oblivion’s standstill (As he screams this out all of the attacks aimed at him are frozen in time and then completely erased). You two can’t beat me just give this up and listen to me Ackk!! (As he finishes speaking he is blindsided by a barrage of attacks.
Axel and Ionius: GRAVITON BREAK!! IONIC BURST!! (The space around Ace is distorted as a gravitational field forms around him that starts to crush his body. In conjunction A stream of ionic energy is released in an electrical stream that causes many bursts of energy which are intensified by the gravitational field and in turn increases the force of the gravity). Rika!! Akira!! Attack him too.
Rika and Akira: RAGNAROK!! TOME OF Infernos!! (Rika summons millions of light blades that appear in the sky followed by a gigantic blade of light that easily encompasses the size of the universe which she then slams them down on Ace. At the same time Akira summons a large book that rains down millions of meteors that move at blistering speeds).
All of the attacks come together to form one attack and they all move towards Ace who has his eyes closed.
Ace (Ace opens his eyes which have now become a crimson red as he unleashes a red aura from his body he calls out his attack HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! OBLIVION ARTS: NEGATIVE GATE (The space around him is distorted and all of the attacks around him are absorbed by an intense darkness that reproduces a dark double of each attack which is then sent back to the attackers). Everyone but Ace: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!! (They are all knocked unconscious. Raven was watching from afar and after seeing that Ace used up all of his energy he goes in for the attack).
Ace: I’m sorry I had to do that but you guys deserved it maybe that will snap you back into reality. Dammit that attack always expends all of my energy… dammit Kira I have to save her but my energy. Ackk!! Whirr! (As he is catching his breath Raven attacks him with a burst of wind that knocks the breath out of him he is then struck with several blades of light. They all impale him). Raven why!! I thought we were friends
Raven: Hm? Raven my name is Raynare your friend Raynard is long gone such a shame but his body is quite useful. Yes, with this body I can destroy everything and rebuild it in my image.
Ace. Raynare who the hell is that that’s not Raven I have to get away and find Kira then we ca…
Raynare: Kira could you be talking about this girl here (Raynare shows Kira’s motionless body.
Ace: Kiraaaaaaaa! You bastard what did you do to her?
Raynare:
I just put her to sleep for a little while she’s still alive
although once I’m done with you she’s next. Or maybe I
should get rid of her first considering your current state you
shouldn’t be too much of a problem.
Ace: GET AWAY FROM
HER!! *Fizzle (Ace attempts to shoot a blast of energy at Raynare but
his energy reserves have been spent and the attack fails). Dammit I
don’t have any more energy.
Raynare: Look at how pathetic
you look just as pathetic as he did when I killed him looks like this
is the end Haaaaaaa DEMONIC SERAPHIM!!!! (Several angelic figures
appear and the all shoot arrows filled with dark auras the arrows
move at blistering speeds and as they are about to hit their target…)
Ace: Nooooo (As Ace yells out a figure with a golden aura appears before him and takes the attack head on. She is impaled by the arrows. Blood pours out of her orifices and the wounds as the dark aura encompasses her body and starts to slowly eat away at it).
Kira:
Hey there looks like I’m in pretty bad condition doesn’t
it? Hehehehe. (She tries to laugh as blood continues to pour out of
her mouth)
Ace: Don’t try to talk just be quiet I’ll
heal your injuries, Haaaaaa. Dammit why won’t it work I can’t
summon up any of my strength. I need to save her but what can I do.
(He tries to heal her but he can’t generate any power).
Kira:
Just stop Ace it’s too late I don’t have much longer. You
have to escape you can’t beat him in your current state.
Ace:
No I won’t leave you behind I will save you and I will kill him
just wait I’ll (Boom! As he is talking more arrows are shot in
their direction. Before they connect Kira uses the last of her energy
to teleport them to a secluded location protected by one of her
barriers)
Kira: Listen to me you need to stay here and recover your strength whatever you do don’t leave and … I want you to know that I really wanted to go through with your plan. I wanted us to become humans together to experience what it is like to have a family to live in a new, fun and exciting world where we could actually find or create our own reason to exist. I love you and no matter what happens I will always be with you so don... (As she is speaking her consciousness fades to black and Ace can feel her soul fading away until there is nothing left).
Ace: NO DON’T GO YOU Can’t LEAVE ME. (Ace falls to his knees with tears streaming down his face he starts to a golden aura as her light glows over him one last time. The tears streaming down his face start to change to streams of black blood and he starts to emit a crimson red aura that is filled with nothing but unbridled rage and malice as he starts to lose control. He goes to face off against Raynare who has just finished killing and absorbing the essences of the other gods and is now looking for him to finish the job.
Chapter 5 A Whole New World
Ace destroys Rika’s barrier and goes to face off against Raynare.
Raynare: Where did those bastards get off to? I don’t have time for this I need to kill them and continue my plan; Gaah!! (Ace dashes towards him and in an instant he shoots several dark spheres that burst through Raynare’s body like paper. He screams in agony as the spheres gyrate inside of him ripping away at his flesh. To make it worse his regeneration causes his flesh and wounds to recover, causing the spheres to inflict more pain without a foreseeable end. Ace glares at him with waves of malice following his gaze. He then lets out a growl so loud that it distorts the space around them. At this point Ace’s malice warps his mind into a bestial state where he could only be recognized as a Demon and not a God).
Raynare: Gahah! Dammit what is this why can’t I get rid of it hurts so much. What the hell happened to you? You’ve become nothing but a monster huh hehehe. Looks like my plan backfired I was supposed to destroy you but I ended being the one destroyed. Well then if I’m going to be destroyed then I’m taking everything with me. OOOOOOOOOOOO! DARK DESCENT: ETERNAL DAMNATION!!! (Raynare unleashes a dark aura that eradicates the spheres penetrating him and then floats into the releasing a gravitational field that pulls all of existence in to the aura. Anything that touches the aura is completely engulfed and destroyed. Ace is slowly being pulled into the field but he doesn’t try to avoid it instead he moves toward it at a slow rate. As he is about to touch the field the gravitational field disappears along with all of existence, it is at this moment that Ace realizes that he is in another dimension. He is then approached by a figure clothed in a red and white cloak with several clock symbols garnishing the cloak and wings made out of gears nut and bolt. Ace: GRRRRR!!!!
Aion: Whoa there Mr. monster or should I call you the God of Oblivion nice to meet you my name is Aion also known as the Demon God of Paradigms. Although I guess you can’t understand me can you? Whoa calm down! (As he was speaking dark beams where shot towards him which he dodged with precision) Whoo nice try but alas you’re not going to hit me with your mind in that state. Upon closer inspection Aion just so happens to be missing half of his body and he has several holes in his body).
Ace: GrrR! WhOOOOO aRRRRReeeee YoUUUUUUUUU!! (Ace is beginning to regain his senses but his mind is still clouded).
Aion: Looks like you’re starting to regain your mental state but it seems like you could use a little help. My body won’t hold up for long I have just enough energy to use my power twice although I guess that’s enough to complete my task. (Ace stares him down and prepares to attack. In an instant he reaches his and attacks but before he can connect Aion raises his hand and unleashes a glow of light.
Aion: HAAAAAAAAH AION CLOCK: REVERSION. (several clocks form and wrap around Ace’s body. Ace’s aura starts to revert back to its black and golden form and his energy is completely revitalized. His Mind is also cleared and all of his malice is removed and replaced with confusion). Dammit that took a lot more energy than I thought it would you have a lot of energy you know that you bastard.
Ace: Huh Where am I? Who are you? Wait you are… Aion right? What happened where is Raynare I have to stop him
Aion: That’s about right This is another dimension I brought you here because your dimension is currently being destroyed by Raynare who came from this dimension.
Ace: what move it I have to stop him!!
Aion:
no you’re not strong enough he has nearly absorbed that entire
dimension there’s nothing you can do to stop him.
Ace: Then
what do I do. (As he is speaking several silhouettes form around
Aion). What the hell!!
Aion:
These are the other demon gods that were killed by Raynare. I brought
them back to life you need to absorb us that’s the only way
that you can beat him.
Ace: Absorb them but how? That’s not
really my thing.
Aion: Dammit you’re the God of Oblivion you
figure it ou… WHIIR BOOM!!! (While Aion is talking the
dimension they are inhabiting is penetrated by a large figure inside
of a dark ball of pure black energy that hold the full power and
force of an infinite number of universes inside of it). Dammit this
is bad hurry and absorb us then use my power to reverse time to
before he absorbs this dimension too. HURRY!!!
Ace:
Haaahhh! OBLIVIONS GATE!!! (He summons a dimensional gate and then
sends the Demon Gods souls into it thus destroying their bodies in
the process. He then takes the gate and absorbs it into his body, by
doing so he absorbed all of their souls. But he didn’t expect
the power and weight of their souls to be so intense that it
literally warped his very existence). UGHHH! AAAAAHHHHH DAMMIT
AAAHHH!! Why does it hurt so much AAAAAHHHHH Blaah! (He starts to
cough up blood and several seals and symbols appear around his body.
He can’t handle the pain of having several God’s
existences fused into his body and having his very existence ripped
apart. His body starts to crack and rip as he is slowly being
destroyed. As he is about to lose consciousness he is bathed in a
golden light. As it touches him he instantly recognizes the light).
Kiraaaaa!
Kira: Sup how you doin?
Ace: How are you? You died in my arms there’s no way you are still alive.
Kira: Don’t get your panties in a bunch I told you I’d always be with you didn’t I. I’m just projecting my soul onto you it looks like you’re in a lot of pain there bet you could use some help. Leave it to me Hah! Song of Rejuvenation. (The golden light starts to swirl around Ace as it fills all of the cracks and tears in his body and the Demon Gods existences are soothed by the golden lights are now completely fused with Ace’s existence.
Ace: The pain is gone I feel wonderful! This power is amazing I feel like a whole new person. With this power I feel like I could defeat Raynare a billion times over.
Kira: Good I’m so glad I could help. Now go get him tiger. (Her essence fades and she has returned to the Celestial Realm).
Ace: Got it, I’ll take him out but first AION’S CLOCK REVERSION: REVISED VERSION Haaaaa! (A gigantic clock appears in space the clock starts to turn its gears in reverse. Time is then rapidly reversed and Ace returns back to before Raynare killed the other gods. But before he could completely return he is struck with a burst of energy coming from the dark sphere which was formerly known as Raynare
Ace: Damn that sphere absorbed some of my energy although I can sense that I’m still stronger than Raynare. (Ace returns to right before Kira is killed).
Raynare: Look at how pathetic you look just as pathetic as he did when I killed him looks like this is the end Haaaaaaa DEMONIC SERAPHIM!!!! HUH (Several angelic figures appear and the all shoot arrows filled with dark auras the arrows move at blistering speeds and as they are about to hit their target when…)
Ace:
Hm nice try asshole but this time it won’t be that easy RAFF
RAFFLESIA Haaaaa! (A wave of green and black energy is released. The
wave of energy causes the space around it to be decayed and
dissolved).
Raynare: WHAT? That was Rafflesia’s attack how
did you learn to use tha… GAAH (He is hit with a barrage of
flaming hot psionic bursts followed by a blast that traps him in a
spatial rend)
Those were Scion and Aisha’s attacks. Don’t
tell me he somehow obtained their powers. Dammit if he did then there
is no way I can beat him plus with his energy refilled he must have
gotten Aion’s power as well.
Ace: That’s right
Raynare THIS IS THE END! HAAAA! (He tackles Raynare into a faraway
planet. Take this! You bastard Oblivion Hammer! (Ace releases a
flurry of punches with a myriad of auras that hits Raynare directly
in the chest knocking his breath away.
Raynare: Gaah! You think
this is over HAAAA Demonic crash! (He grabs Ace by his arm and
releases a powerful kick with a black and white that slams into his
abdomen with the force of a meteorite). They continue to throw
punches and kicks at each other that causes the planet to start to
crumble. Ace summons a blade with his power of oblivion encompassing
the blade while Raynare summons a spear with a dark and light
swarming aura. As they clash with each other blood is spewed
constantly from their wounds along with the sound of several bones
breaking. The fight gets so intense that volcanoes start to erupt,
mountains begin to crumble, oceans all over the world start to
evaporate and eventually large fissures form all over the world as
the world is slowly destroyed).
Ace and Raynare: TAKE THISSSSSSSS! OBLIVION ARTS: SOUL REAVER!!!!! DEVILS OATH: HEAVENLY DAMNATION!!!!! (Ace summons a giant figure with a scythe and it fuses with him turning his blade into a scythe with a dark electrical aura that erases all that touches it which he then swings at Raynare. Raynare summons a giant demon with angel eyes that shoots hellfire with a heavenly aura that encompasses his spear The fire melts away all that enters its path which he attacks Ace with. Their attacks connect with an explosion that easily surpasses any force either of them have ever experienced or produced. The blast from their clash knocks the both of them through billions of universes until they reach a small green and blue planet filled with human’s animal’s plants and many other organisms).
Ace: Uhhh where am I? is this earth? Damn I can barely move my body. I have to hurry and find Raynare I have to finish this *Crash (Ace falls to the ground his body is covered in injuries and he is so weak that even destroying even a planet would be impossible). Hah there he is Raynare is unconscious perfect Gaah! (Ace goes over to collect Raynare’s body but is then impaled by Raynare’s spear. He then shoves the spear further until it rips through Ace’s back).
Raynare: I told you I wouldn’t be dying alone Hehehe *Slam (Raynare’s arm then drops to the ground and all of the color drains from his eyes. He is now dead.
Ace: You bastard! Good riddance this is going to consume all of my energy it would be a lot better if the others could help me with it. Now how did that technique Akira taught me go again? Ahhh now I remember I have just enough energy to use this once guess I’ll be the only one left out (He inhales deeply then exhales with vigor). Now then time to use that huh let’s hope this works Haaaaa! CELESTIAL OBLIVION: TRANSFORM!!!! (Ace emits a dark and light aura that swallows up his fellow gods. The demon gods he absorbed are removed from his body and along with Raynare are also swallowed up by the aura. They are then erased from existence; gone without a trace).
Ace:
Dammit I can’t die yet I have to… (Ace is slowly losing
his consciousness as he slowly crawls into a dark garden with
surprisingly lively and beautiful flowers and a serene waterfall. As
he is crawling he hears the sound of a baby crying
Waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh. Confused he goes to check for what the foreign
sound is and he sees a small baby with crimson red eyes and black
hair.
Ace: Heh what is this thing? is this what human look like
it’s a little on the small side I wonder if this is what all
humans start as or is it their true form curiouser and curiouser.
Ace: Hey there little guy how ya doing? You don’t seem very
smart guess you can’t understand me huh? Well then I guess I’ll
make this quick sorry about this little guy I might just end up
destroying your life or making it better than it could have ever been
but remember that whatever happens you are you and nobody can ever
change that. What
is a god or a goddess? They are just existences that create the
systems that lower organisms become the cogs for. But why do they
truly exist? Are they there to watch over us? Guide and protect us?
Or to usurp us and control our every action and treat us like puppets
in a play or characters in a game? No one knows the true meaning of
their existence not even the gods themselves. All they know is that
they came into existence with a power far beyond all others and how
they use thatpower
is up to them.
I guess I’ll never be able to learn the truth but maybe you can
learn for me that’s the only thing I ask from you. Now then see
you around Kid (Ace places his hand on the baby’s chest and
then places his essence, soul and very existence into the baby’s
body and with that his very existence has been erased). Waaaaah!!
Waaaaaah!! Waaaaahhhh!!!
News reporter: Today is July 9th 2090 and today there is a very urgent report it seems that there has been some kind of meteor that has crashed in the dark continent of GeoVarium. The destruction has nearly destroyed the continent but there is no sign of what caused the destruction but all we know is that the explosion could be heard throughout the planet. We don’t *click.
Kira: Aaaaaah!! What was that explosion oh no it sounds like it crashed near where I left Ace I have to hurry I hope he didn’t get hit? Ace!!! are you okay? Thank goodness you’re fine Hmm? What is this feeling it feels really familiar like a bright and warm aura. Maybe It’s nothing.
Chapter 6
Ace: What is a human are we all just cogs in the system called life? Do us humans even have any free will or are we just controlled by the Gods and Demons that watch us? Do Gods and Demons even exist or are they just lies fed to us by those before us to try and scare us into bending to their wills. Whatever the case whether Gods and Demons exist or whether they are just fables it doesn’t matter all that matters is that No one controls. No free will don’t make me laugh I control my life and no else and anyone who tries to control me will have to face my wrath.
Ace has now reached the age of seven and after many dreadful moments in his past has become a pessimist and lives with hatred and malice in his heart aimed towards all that exists causing him to close his heart to others. He has dark red eyes that give off a bright and ominous glow that resembles a monster staring down at a human before it devours them. With an IQ of 272 he is incredibly intelligent and analyzes every situation thoroughly and with a negative outlook that ensures that any situation he is ends in the most favorable way even if the outcome ensures his death.
Ace: Why the hell do I have to go to school with a bunch of dumbasses everyday it’s the same thing “are you okay? Why are you so angry? Why don’t you ever talk to us? You should try being nicer then you would have more friends”. Why can’t these people understand that I don’t want anything to do with them. They all make me sick I wish I could just get rid of thes… *bang (A loud bang is heard as the classroom door is swung open to reveal a Serenity Michaelis a seven-year-old girl with beautiful green eyes and long chestnut colored hair clothed in a school uniform. She is always cheerful and seems to never run out of energy and she also happens to be the only classmate who tries to associate herself with him. She runs over to Ace’s table to greet him but receives a cold response).
Serenity: HEY THERE ACE HOW YOU DOIN.
Ace: And here comes the biggest nuisance. What part of stay away from me do you not understand?
Serenity: Now, now don’t be a sour puss Im just saying hi and besides why wouldn’t I come say hi to my friend (As she says this everyone in the class turns their attention towards their conversation. Ace notices and tries to end it.
Ace: I told you before you and me are not nor will we ever be friends. Get it through your thick skull and LEAVE ME ALONE! *bang (He slams his hand on the desk for authority and then leaves the room and goes to sleep on the roof of the building.
Classmates: Are you alright Serenity? You were just saying hi and he had to be all mean and yell at you he’s such a jerk. Someone needs to put him in his place.
Serenity: Don’t worry he’s just a little grumpy I’m sure he will be fine eventually.
Classmates: Why do you even talk to that jerk anyway he always tries to give you the cold shoulder we understand that your nice but there’s no reason to be nice to a punk like that.
Serenity: It’s because he’s all alone. He’s always walking around looking angry but I can tell that he’s not angry but sad, something must have happened to him in the past to make him that way and I want to be there for him to tell him that whatever happened he doesn’t have to deal with it alone. I really like him and I think we could be good friends in the future. Plus, I think he’s kinda cute. (She whispers that as she sits down to start her class.
(Soon Ace falls asleep and school is over).
Ace: Wow I didn’t mean to sleep through the whole day guess I better get home before I get scolded. (As he Is walking home a group of males from his class surround him).
Classmates: Well, well if it isn’t mister too cool to go to class where are you going huh.
Ace: Hm! If I just ignore them they’ll go away hmm (One of his classmates grabs him by the shirt). What the hell do you want let go of my shirt and move.
Classmates: We asked you a question and we don’t like to be ignored. Yeah why don’t you stick around and have some fun with us.
Ace: (Here we go with this again these assholes always do this they’re lucky that im not allowed to hurt them or they would never be able to the hospital once im done with them). *smack *thud (His classmates start to beat him up but he doesn’t try to retaliate so he just takes it head on).
Ace: When will they learn that they aren’t even doing any damage to me. Huh?
Serenity: Teacher OVER THERE LOOK (She points towards the boys who all attempt to run once they notice the teacher coming).
Teacher: Hey get away from him right now all of you are getting your parents called and detention.
Classmates: Dammit that stupid girl called the teacher Uhh! Let’s get out of here. This isn’t over we will come back and next time it’s going to be a whole lot worse.
Teacher: Those lousy kids making me have to work. (The teacher walks away without giving a second glance to Ace and Serenity.
Serenity: Are you okay good thing I showed up when I did huh. (She gives Ace a thumbs up but Ace doesn’t look too happy about it.
Ace: Why? Why did you help me huh? I didn’t ask for your help did I? I told you to leave me alone why don’t you understand.
Serenity: I was just trying to he…
Ace: I DON’T CARE WHAT YOU WERE TRYING TO DO DON’T GET INVOLVED IN MY BUSINESS AGAIN YOU GOT THAT HUH DO YOU.
Serenity: I *sniff understand. (Tears start to fall from her eyes as she runs away crying.
Ace: Why can’t she just leave me alone? Doesn’t she understand that the more she tries to be friendly with me the harder both of our lives are going to be. I appreciate that she’s trying to be my friend but she’s only putting herself in danger. I’m just trying to protect her but maybe I was a little harsh. (Ace heads home and Is greeted by his older cousin Kira an 9-year-old with long and beautiful red hair with golden eyes that shine as bright as the sun. She is a genius who from the age of 4 was confirmed to have an IQ of 295. She was hated and loved by many because she was incredibly talented and skilled at everything she does whether It was athletics, educational or She is also a good judge of character and so smart that it is as if she is reading your mind and staring into your soul with each gaze she throws your way that makes it almost impossible to deceive her. She is also the second smartest the strongest and the fastest among the three siblings. She always maintains a calm and dignified expression as if she were a queen and her personality follows suit).
Kira: Hey Ace how was school? Boring as usual I presume.
Ace Yeah it was completely uneventful.
Kira: Really so I guess those bruises on your arms and back are nonexistent aren’t they.
Ace: Why did you ask if you already knew. Matter fact forget it I don’t know why I even try to understand you. *sniff, sniff Huh what are you doing?!
Kira:
I smell perfume on you were you with a girl? Did you finally find a
girl you’re interested in that’s great news!
Ace: Quit
jumping to conclusions it’s not like that at all!! Well
maybe a little.
Kira:
Is that really the case well if it’s only a little then I’m
sure you won’t mind telling me about it.
Ace: Its nothing
really. Everyone at my school either thinks of me as a demon or a
monster, they always try to avoid me and talk behind my back. I’m
used to it but then there’s Serenity she always tries to
associate herself with me, I’m fine with it but she’s
only going to make both of our lives worse by becoming friends with
me.
Kira: Hmm so you want her to be your friend but you don’t want her to be ridiculed for it. I bet you tried to push her away but she keeps on coming back she must really like you. She must have been the one to stop those bullies from attacking you so how did you thank her?
Ace: I yelled at her and made her cry. I didn’t mean to make her cry but I didn’t want her to be in any more danger than she already was.
Kira: YOU IDIOT!!! YOU MADE HER CRY ARE YOU STUPID *whack. (Kira slaps Ace in the back of his head with an irritated look on her face as he holds his head in pain). Sorry about that I lost my cool for a second. Look if you want her to be your friend and she wants to be your friend then you just have one choice and that’s to protect her got it? Now get the hell out and go find her!!!
Ace: But *whack (Kira once again slaps Ace’s head).
Kira: OUT NOW!!! (Ace runs out of the house before he is hit again and goes to find Serenity). Good luck.
Serenity: *Sniff, sniff (Tears are dropping one after the other as she has finally stopped running and ends up under a bridge near a body of water as she stares into the water at her reflection). I just wanted to be his friend but I guess he really does hate me. Whoa I didn’t even realize it was getting this dark I should get home before I get in trouble huh whoa! (As she turns around the bullies from earlier corner and push her to the ground).
Ace: Dammit where is she at I have to find her and apologize.
Bullies:
Well if it isn’t the demons’ girlfriend how ya doin?
Looks like your boyfriend isn’t around so why don’t you
play with us.
Serenity: AHHHHH!!! (The leader of the bullies grabs
her by her hair while she tries to get up and run causing her to fall
on her backside). Let me go get away from me.
Bullies Leader: Where are you going we just got started playing. Hey you’re safer with us than that demon. (As he is speaking Ace turns around the corner and finds the bullies attacking Serenity and then goes to save her.
Ace: GET AWAY FROM HER!! *Thud smack crash (Ace runs in and tackles the leader to the ground and starts to throw a barrage of punches at him. The other bullies try to pull him off but he pushes them away and knocks them to the ground.
Bullies:
Surround him and hold him down you IDIOTS!! Yeah get em! (The others
grab him by his arms while one punches him in the stomach. He falls
to the ground while spitting blood out of his mouth. How do you like
that you monster? They then start to throw several barrages of
punches at Ace which cause him to fall to the ground spewing blood
from his mouth. Serenity is being held down and she is in tears
begging the bullies to stop.
Serenity: STOP IT PLEASE STOP! WHAT
DID HE DO TO DESERVE THIS? (Serenity pleads for the bullies to stop
but they continue to attack with vigor and rage in their eyes. Within
minutes Ace is beaten, bruised and bloody as he is then thrown to the
ground).
Bullies: Not much of a Demon now are you *Thud (Their leader kicks Ace in the head while he Is down. Now that the nuisance has been dealt with we can get back to you. (They let Serenity go and she runs over to Ace and she cries over him trying to protect him).
Ace: GET AWAY!!! HURRY UP AND RUN WHILE YOU HAVE THE CHANCE!!
Serenity: No way I’m not leaving you behind. I’ll protect you just stay down. (She stands up and shields Ace’s body from harm).
Bullies:
Aww look at that the monster’s girlfriend is protecting
him.
Serenity: You jerks call him a monster but you’re the
monsters. He didn’t do anything to you and you chose to pick on
him how can you even call yourselves humans, you are all less than
worms and… I WISH YOU WOULD ALL DIE!
Bullies: Oh look at that the little brat is finally showing some backbone huh well then TAKE THIS! *Smack (The leader grabs Serenity by her hair and slaps her to the ground. She is holding her face which has a large handprint and she has started bleeding. Tears start to well up in her eyes than flow out like a faucet. As she falls to the ground Ace’s eyes grow wide. His red eyes start to glow brightly and a dark aura starts to surround his body, his breathing gets heavy and he starts to clench his fists and bite his lips so hard that they start to bleed. His Voice grows dark and deep and the blood that he was dripping turned to a pitch black color and starts to swirl around him and wrap around his body. He starts to walk forward with limitless amounts of hatred and malice).
Ace: HOW DARE YOUUUUUU!!!!
Bullies: Huh what the hell is going on? HOLY SHIT! Everybody run!!!!
Ace: Graah! Haah! *Slice, slam, crash, crunch. (The bullies try to run but Ace moves faster than the eye can see and Slices through both of the bully’s arms with his bare hands. He tackles one of the bullies to the ground then grabs him by his head and tosses him into the ground then he releases a kick that sends the bully into a wall with the force of a train breaking his spine in the process. One of the bullies tries to blindside him but he nimbly dodges it and threw a punch at him that knocked him 10 meters into the water cracking his skull. None of the bullies except for the leader remains, he looked in awe with a face of fear and trepidation Ace walks toward him with a devilish smirk on his face). And then there was one. Well Mr. leader looks like it’s just you and me, now then what do you say we have a little fun.
Leader: Please stop I’m sorry I promise we won’t ever touch you or her or go near either of you ever again so please don’t do this!
(Ace then closes his eyes and walks closer to the leader) *Stare (He opens his eyes with vigor and releases a death stare full of unbridled hatred and malice). Haaaa! (Ace disappears from the leaders’ sight and throws a punch that knocks the leader to the ground he then steps on his chest and applies inhuman force that slowly crushes his chest and ribcage).
Leader:
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Please God stop this I’m sorry I’m so, so
sorry I promise on everything I love that I will never do anything to
you or her ever again no matter what so please (The leader starts
crying, begging and praying for someone to save him but there is no
one to save him. Ace then pins the leader down to the ground and
starts to rain a flurry of punches down on his face the leader
attempts to fight and squirm his way out but Ace’s grip is too
strong and his resistance only serves to increase the amount of pain
dealt to him. He throws so many punches that soon the leaders face
becomes completely unrecognizable, but even after he stops resisting
and his body goes limp Ace continues to throw punches until the
leaders’ face becomes nothing but a jumbled mess).
Serenity:
Whaa no way! (Serenity is in complete shock at what just occurred,
within seconds the men that were trying to assault her were all
killed without remorse and she just witnessed it all happen without
even being able to comprehend what happened. As Ace is continuing his
assault she works up her courage and goes to stop him).
Serenity:
STOP! Ace you have to stop this now! It’s over you don’t
have to fight anymore. I’m safe you protected me so there’s
no reason to continu... Ahhh! (While she is speaking Ace grabs her
and picks her up by her neck). Listen to me snap out of it they’re
already gone, you have to break free of this I know you can do it I
BELIEVE IN YOU!! (She embraces him tightly and starts to cry and as
her tears drop on his skin the darkness starts to slowly fade away
and then eventually completely disappears).
Ace: Serenityyyyyyyyyyyyyy… (Her words finally get through to him and he regains his consciousness. But as he calls out her name he falls over and completely loses his consciousness).
Serenity: Ace, Ace I know you can hear me you have to wake up please don’t die! YOU HAVE TO WAKE UP!!! (While she is screaming Kira arrives and calms her down). Huh who are you?
Kira:
Now, now calm down sweetie. I assure you that he is not dead he’s
just sleeping. He just overused all of his energy no reason to fret
over it. Why don’t you help me carry him back home and you can
stay there till he recovers, I’ll ask my parents to call your
parents and tell them that you are staying over.
Serenity: Uhh
Okay you really don’t mind?
Kira: Be my guest you’re
more than welcome to stay as long as you like. Plus, I’m sure
that he would be quite happy to see your face when he wakes up
Hehehe. Well then let’s get going sweetheart.
And this is a later part in the story with the different writing style
Now then let’s begin its over when one side is unable to fight.
(Kira is sparring against Ace while Akira and Rika watch on in the background in the background They all assumes their stances, all of them capable of using several styles of martial arts including jujitsu, karate, Kung Fu, etc.)
Now then come at me I’ll show both of you how wide the difference in our skill is.
We charged forward and then reached our target. We threw several punches and kicks at her which she blocked and dodged with serene grace.
That’s the best you got she said I taught you much better than that, she then jumps in the air and slams down with unrivaled speed crashing into the ground causing a large crater to be formed.
As we try to dodge her attack debris from the crater hits us causing unexpected damage and sending us flying I catch my bearings and stand firm to catch Rika but the force of her flying into me knocks the air out of my chest Kira appears behind me sending a powerful kick to my backside which I take the brunt of knocking me into a large boulder collapsing it.
What’s wrong if you don’t work harder you’re going to lose, she said you’re supposed to be the man of the house but right now you look like a little boy, and Rika is that all your ambition equals up to I thought you wanted to deal with me, with skills like that you won’t get very far. I’m only using 20% of my power and yet you two haven’t even given me one injury to speak of!
What was that I said with an irritated tone as flames started to form from my fingertips, let’s see if you can take this Haaaaa! Inferno Surge I released a beam of flames from my hand that splits apart into several spheres that shoot through the air like an arrow and stop around Kira’s body. I then snap my fingers and all the spheres explode but she dodges all of them leaving flames in her wake she lets her guard down for a second and then the air becomes cold. Rika has released an aura of ice, Icicle Storm! She screams as the water molecules in the air are frozen and start to form several icicles which she shoots towards Kira with vigor but much to her expectations she destroys them with the utmost ease.
“Attacking me one at a time isn’t going to amount to much, she said if you really want to win then attack me together Hyaah! She sends a wave of energy at us that spreads the further it goes and we both jump in the air to dodge but it curves and raises towards us I grab Rika and throw her towards Kira.
Take This Frostbite! Rika screams out as several wolves made of ice are summoned and attack Kira simultaneously but she attacks all of them punches and kicks not noticing that the ice she destroys melts and forms water around her legs. Icicle field! She freezes the water and the ice formed wraps around Kira’s legs Haaaaa I then shoot several spheres of flame at her but as they are about to hit her they disappear.
she breaks the ice and summons a hole in front of her causing all of the flames to disappear *gasp* No way where did they g… the hole reappears behind me and the flames come out of it with blistering speed. I dodge but the flames explode blasting me towards Kira who aims a kick at me but before it hits me I jump above her and slam down with a vicious knee which she dodges causing me to crash into the ground.
Come on you two I know you can do you just have to work
together Akira says in the while swinging her legs atop a boulder in the
background she easily dodges all the debris flying her way.
We should attack her together, Rika says as she jumps back to my position. We
then hold hands together and release our auras and they fuse together.
“Let’s do this” (I use one of my strongest techniques) “Gale Force: Conflagration”, (she also calls out one of her strongest techniques “Glacial Arts: Glaciation” (Our linked hands release an orange and blue aura that forms a phoenix that releases ice and flames. The phoenix gets larger as we charge more energy into it and soon encompasses the mountain range we are fighting on. The contradictory temperatures create several clouds in the sky that produce rain.). “My energy wavers from the damage I took but I manage to stand firm and continue to attack”
“So your attacking together now well then let’s see if you can handle this! Virtuous Gate!!”
She lets out a large aura filled with intense power causing the air around her to dissipate and the earth around her to crumble causing large fissures and earthquakes all over the mountain range. Her aura shoots into the sky dispersing the clouds and producing storms that strike lightning and thunder down upon us we stand firm and the storms rain down around us.
She then condenses the aura into a beam and sends it straight for us which we retaliate by firing our beam.
The two beams collide causing a struggle that releases pure energy waves that rupture and destroy the mountain range we are fighting on the damage starts to escalate.
Kira sees the destruction being caused and condenses her attack into her hand and transforms it into a miniscule sphere. Our beam shoots further into her path.
She then throws the sphere forward and its small form emits a blinding light that could illuminate the world. The light shoots up and then slams down causing the sphere to change to energy in the shape of a cube that distorts the space around it. “Now is the real test, she says as the distortion is compressed and as it bursts forward it hits our beam. It shoots right through it consuming the beam and then firing towards us.
“Dammit I have to stop it but I’m not strong enough to block
it I guess I only have one choice” He pushes Rika out of the way, “What are you
doing your going to get hit she screams, as she attempts to grab his hand but
fails. “Gaah” he cries as the Cube of energy hits him directly in his back
knocking him through their house and into a far off lake knocking him
unconscious.
“Guess it’s just you and me now Rika!” Akira can you be a dear and take Ace
back into the house and nurse him until he wakes up she say’s
“Sure thing are you two going to continue I don’t want you two to hurt each other, She said plus you two seem to be angry at each other I don’t know why but I sense that you two have a lot of hostility towards each other lately and I don’t like it.”
Don’t worry about it this is just a little sisterly quarrel
we’ll resolve it right now they say as they both stare each other down with
hatred in their eyes.
Good luck you two she says as she enters the house with Ace on her back.
Chapter 11: Break the Chains
“Now what do you say we take this to someplace where we can talk and fight seriously Rika. I want to see exactly how strong you really are.”
Well then leave that to me she says as a tall man with a
long black cloak appears and speaks in a dark and ominous tone.
“Yes mistress you need an area where you can fight alone leave it to me he says
as he releases an electric aura filled with darkness from his hands and shoots
it towards the ground he then screams out (Impel World). The aura creates a
black hole that sucks the girls into it and spits them out in an alternate
dimension. First off this dimension is completely cut off from ours; so don’t
worry if you die here you won’t die in the other dimension so go ahead and run
wild little ladies. Second you can’t leave until one of you dies and the pain
suffered is real so take that into consideration when fighting, I’ll be
watching from afar so make sure you give me a show.
Well Rika now that those two aren’t around why don’t you quit holding back and fight me for real with everything you’ve got.
Dammit looks like I’ll have to get serious, she thought “I guess if it’s just the us I can use that” She closes her eyes and a marvelous light shines around her “Abraxas come forth and release the chains of fate on my enemy, as she says this a beautiful silver haired girl with a Halo and angelic wings along with a pure white angelic garb appears from the light.” Now then you’re taking her on first
“Abraxas huh? This is my first time seeing her she’s very stunning and her aura is so powerful its tearing away at my skin, she may even be stronger than me. Well then let’s see what you two got she says as she pulls up her shirts sleeves and reveals bracelets with abnormal inscriptions that start to light up
“Release the seal” She exclaims causing the bracelets to pop and the built up energy inside to swirl around her covering her body and causing the space around her to become distorted. Now then let’s get started, they exclaim as they both prepare their stances.
They both charge at each other with inconceivable speed and force that causes shockwaves and earthquakes that hold the power to topple entire countries. No clear damage or fatigue can be seen from either girls and they fight with intense rage and aggression fueling their attacks.
Rika watches from the background and focuses on the fight “Chains of Revelation Abraxas yells as her wings form into slithering chains that wrap around Kira they start to tighten as she comes in and throws a kick at her chest knocking her back through a pillar that formed from the shadows.
She catches her balance only to be blindsided by Abraxas who throws several flurries of punches and kicks at her causing significant damage. She then breaks the chains with ease causing a look of surprise to form on Abraxas’s face.
“That’s all, I’m sure you can do better than that she says as she spits blood from her mouth then disappears and reappears behind Abraxas
Kira jumps into the air and summons two guns from a sphere of energy and shoots them releasing several bullets made from her energy.
Abraxas uses her wings to form a ball of energy that absorbs the bullets and reflects them back at her which she retaliates by knocking the bullets to the ground.
Hm! Nice your pretty strong Abraxas it’s a shame you’re my enemy I’d like us to be friends or sparring partners, so what do you say?
“Hm! I have no interest in your proposal I’m only interested in fulfilling the mission given to me by my master.
‘Well then let’s continue! She shouts as they both clash they get into a struggle: “Oogh” they both exclaim as they are blasted back into one of the pillars.
“Looks like you two are equally matched or I would say that if you two weren’t holding back. Abraxas release all of your chains and use your full power, she said and Abraxas replies “Your wish is my command.” After saying so she removes her cloak revealing several chains tightly wrapped around her body tearing into her skin. “Wings of the Sephirot break free from your bindings and release eternal light upon all who bask in your glow, she breaks them all releasing several pillars of bright white light that brightens and tears through the once empty and dark dimension.
The pillars wrap around her body bestowing her with unimaginable
amounts of energy and substantially increasing the glow and size of her wings.
“This is my true power, let’s see if you have what it takes to stop me at my
strongest.
She turns into pure light and teleports into the sky. “Take this! Ragnarok!” She creates and releases several
blades of light that tear through the air and in an instant rain down upon
Kira.
She blocks and dodges most of the blades. “Gaaah!” she screams as she is hit in the knee by one of the blades which dissolve when they hit her leaving an intense burning wound. Dammit that hurts, she remarks as she stands with a clear hole in her knee she can barely stand so she floats in the air using her energy for support.
She doesn’t have time to catch her bearings as another barrage of blades is fired at her. Not this time, Psycho gate she screams as a large white portal is formed before her and all of the blades are sucked inside and then shot back out with double the speed and power.
The blades shot back slice through the air with precision and fly directly towards Abraxas but she simply flexes her wings and the blades are swallowed by the light. She then
What’s wrong if you don’t fight me seriously you’re going to die I’ll give you the chance to fight back but if you waste my time you’re going to pay for it she says as she flies back and waits for her response
“I’m gonna have to get serious, she thought as she forms a box in her hand and opens it revealing,” “Pandora’s blade” a pitch black blade filled with darkness. Now then, she says as she takes a stance while firmly gripping her blade; what do you say we get started!
She charges forward at a blazing speed that surprises Abraxas as she swings her blade down at her the blade is barely blocked but not without knocking Abraxas through several pillars and launching her hundreds of kilometers through the infinite dimension.
Abraxas summons a blade of light and goes in for an attack. They clash with each other several times each strike causing minimal damage to their bodies and the space behind them. They continue to clash with each other not giving an inch; showing perfect precision in their strikes they strike with a speed so intense that it appears as though there are several copies of them fighting at once in difference areas.
This is getting good I haven’t had this much fun fighting in a while Kira exclaims as she begins to increase the speed and force of her attacks to the point where she vastly transcends Abraxas’s causing massive damage her to go on the defensive. Dammit I shouldn’t have been so lenient with her now she’s surpassed me and I don’t have anything else to combat her with. I’m sorry master I have failed you; I must concede defeat.
Well I had a lot of fun but if you have nothing left then I guess this is where I finish you, I’ll commend you though you’re the only person I have ever fought that pushed me this far. Now then let’s end this, she yells as she swings her blade down with extreme force. But as her blade is swung down she realizes that her target is gone.
Master, Abraxas calls out as she is now in Rika’s arms “I swear talk about useless looks like even you couldn’t beat her alone. Hey sis have you ever heard the story of the Seven Kings and the Seven Emperors?
The Seven Kings and the Seven Emperors? Yeah I’ve heard the story every thousand years there are 14 humans split between two different dimensions with the potential to lead the world as kings and emperors. I believe they are called transcendent beings They are smarter, stronger and faster than normal humans and they all have special powers that slowly lead them closer to losing the title of humans and becoming angels and demons. As they gain power they rise through the hierarchies and stages of angels and demons, eventually the Kings and Emperors then have exclusive wars in their individual dimension. In the end one king and one emperor remains and they then gain the title of the one true god and devil who hold all of the power in existence until 14 new humans are born with the ability to become the new god and devil and the cycle continues indefinitely.
That’s right leave it to my sister to have knowledge on everything; then again you and me are transcendents after all so it’s only right you would know. But do you know about the three different tiers of transcendence.
Different tiers? Never heard of them what are they?
There are 3 different tiers of transcendence and each tier has its own kind. There are the abnormalities which are linked with humans the title demigods are given to the strongest, then there are the anomalies which are transcendents who are closer to the hierarchy of angels their strongest being the Archangels. Last there are the aberrations who of course are closer to the hierarchy of demons the strongest being the Demi-devils.
I see so those three tiers determine what kind of transcendent you are. Then that must mean that the term transcendent beings doesn’t apply to only the kings and emperors then right.
You didn’t know that but I wonder do you know about The Regalia?
The Regalia are special weapons and armor given the powers of transcendence by
the gods, created specifically to be used by the Kings and Emperors. When they
come into contact with the kings and Emperors they adapt to them and they
evolve and devolve constantly based on their user’s power. The Regalia can be
used by others but it only evolves when used by the compatible owner.
Me, you, Akira, and that Ventus kid are 4 of the Seven kings but the rest are
unknown. That cloaked asshole just so happens to be one of the Seven Emperors,
he says he doesn’t know the others but it’s obvious that he is hiding the
truth.
There are fourteen Regalia spread throughout the world by the servants of the Kings. The Kings Regalia in order are the
On the other hand, we have the Emperors Regalia
These weapons individually are strong enough to destroy the world and even the universe several times over so they have had their powers reduced with several seals and restraints and locked away. But of course it’s up to their users to unleash that power.
The Regalia of course after several centuries have changed form and become less than what they were but their powers haven’t disappeared. They can change into any form whether it be household appliances, weapons, technology and even regular pieces of paper.
If you know about the Regalia that must mean that you own one don’t you? I of course own one of the Regalia, she says as she lowers Abraxas to the ground... and she’s right here.
I met it or rather her a long time ago in a village on the Northwestern regions of GeoVarium. She was trapped under a large pile of rubble and at near death I couldn’t leave her alone now could I.
Little did I know that she wasn’t human she was actually an irregularity. Abraxas aka the Seraphim’s Chain was the child of the high Seraphim Abraxia and the God of Heavenly Restraints Chromia. Her parents were killed by the fallen angel Abaddon who ascended to the title of demon god when she was a baby.
But before they died they both imbued her with their powers and sent her to live with a human family. But during her childhood her parents were killed by a group of marauders and she was kidnapped by a group of scientists claiming they were going to save but were planning on using her as their first prototype.
They wanted to advance humankind and make all humans become transcendent beings and as a side mission they were trying to make organic Regalia using their test subjects.
She became my servant although while she is loyal to me her mission isn’t to serve me but rather to find the person who saved her from completely becoming a weapon. She only follows me for that one goal because she feels that I can help her find him.
I see so that’s her story I had a feeling she was more than a normal girl, someone as strong as her couldn’t possibly be a normal human. Is she the only Regalia in a humanoid form?
Not sure there may be one more but our research hasn’t provided us with much research… *Ding* repetitive beeping resonates from a timer hidden away in Rika’s Clothes. Oh would you look at that looks like the timer has finished Abraxas you can get up now.Chapter 13: Pandora vs Valkyrie
What she wasn’t unconscious but I could sense her energy
fading and now its recovered.
Of course I was just stalling for time while she recovered. Now then Abraxas
what do you say we show her the power of our Regalia.
Yes, Master! She exclaims as she wraps her wings around Rika Now sister I’ll show you the true power of the Seraphim’s Chain! Several bright lights form around Rika’s body, as the lights start to spread Abraxas forms even larger wings and Rika’s bodies begin to float into the air.
The feathers on Abraxas wings start to encompass her body
and she produces chains that shoot up into the sky and then slice back down
through Rika’s body.
The chains wrap around her body and an egg formed from the chains develops
around her. Inside the egg several lights wrap around her arms, legs, head and
torso. A Golden helmet appears on her head with a halo above it, and Valkyrian
armor forms on her limbs and body along with several wings followed by many
rings of light that float around her.
“Seraphim’s Chains break the mold” Haaaa! Her body also increases in size to the point where she looks like a grown woman with an angelic voice that echoes when she speaks. A large pillar of light forms around her and then shrinks into her hand forming a long wide and sharp golden lance.
This is my version of the Seraphim’s Chains I call it the Valkyries Judgement isn’t it beautiful she says as she grows wings with chain armor adorning them and her eyes become an intense gold that freezes all who stare into them that flap releasing sparkling lights that disintegrates whatever they touch.
Now then don’t you think it’s your turn to release your
regalia I mean if you could barely beat Abraxas then the two us together at our
strongest is pretty much overkill.
I’d rather not use this but considering the strength difference looks like I
have no choice.
A large chest appears in the sky; the chest begins to emanate dark energy.
Woah that’s a lot of energy I wonder what she’s doing.
“Open, Pandora’s Box.” She says as the Chest opens and masses of demons and souls pour out from it along with an unimaginable amount of dark energy that completely consumes her body.
The demons and souls wrap around her body forming various dark seals and curses. The seals start to engorge and develop further into black armor. The curses come together and form into a large shield with a large lock in the center with the handle becoming a blade that stabs into her arm and interweaving itself into her skin.
Her body grows in size to match Rika’s and her long hair grows longer and is adorned with several eerie skulls and her eyes become a demonic crimson red almost as if she was possessed.
She focuses her eyes on Rika “This is the Equilibrium Aegis’s new form I call it Pandora’s Box, and those who look into Pandora’s box receive a curse as powerful as those who open it. Now then this is what you wanted isn’t it what do you say we get started little sister.
So this is the power of your Regalia huh didn’t think it would be overbearing. Its name is Pandora’s box huh, so you just released evil upon the world and it seems to have corrupted your body isn’t that quite dangerous.
Quit talking and fight let’s just get this over with and get back home its almost time to start dinner, she says as she takes her stance and raises her Shield.
So feisty alright then let’s do this, she says as she prepares her lance.
They stand across from each other with serious expressions, both sides exuding dark and light auras collectively. The air around them is sliced through as they disappear and then clash with each other causing a shockwave that rips through the empty dimension.
Woah big sis looks like our power is quite immense we should
hold back a bit or else we’ll destroy this dimension and probably the outside
world as well. You should ca… Haaaaa! *crash* *slice* she is interrupted by
Kira’s shield that slams down into her with extreme force that causes more
intense shockwaves.
I said quit talking! If you don’t get serious then you’re going to die. I’m not
holding back anymore! she charges in with a flurry of strikes that knock Rika
back causing minor cuts and cracks to form on her armor.
Did those demons consume her mind I didn’t think her power would have that kind of effect on her? I guess I should end this quickly then, she says as she flies in the air and calls out “Valkyrian lancer”
She spins in the air picking up speed and force then plunges downwards with extreme force aiming right for Kira’s chest. But immediately as she is about to connect Kira disappears and reappears behind her slamming her shield down against her back. She dodges the brunt of the attack but it still hit causing her to stagger Kira then shoots a ball of energy from her hand filled with darkness at her but she dodges it with grace flying into the sky.
“Ring of Poise” she exclaims as she shoots rings made of light that wrap around Kira’s body and rapidly tighten she then lowers herself to the ground and charges energy into the tip of the lance “take this! Radiant Lancet” The lance shoots a beam of energy that spreads shooting hundreds of small beams that all shoot forward with speed and accuracy.
Kira’s shield begins to glow and causes a huge explosion breaking free from the rings “Hm! Real cute ‘Negative Aegis’ let’s see if you can handle this!
She charges energy into her shield and then shoots it out at full force clashing with all of the beams Rika shot out the beams cancel each other out leaving behind cracks in the space around them.
Did you really think I would let my power control me? I hope that isn’t the best you have to offer because if it is this fight isn’t going to last long.
Hm! So you finally decided to speak well let’s see if you can handle this she goes in for an attack the two clash several times Rika attacking and Kira defending and vice-versa.
Their power is equal and while Rika has the speed and mobility advantage Kira has the skill advantage so neither fighter has any clear edge. Their clashes continue causing cracks and cuts to form on their armor.
“This is getting fun huh sis?” Bet you didn’t expect us to be this strong did you, she says as she begins to charge up more power into her lance she then jumps backwards and cloaks herself in light while forming rings of light around her lance that increase its size and weight.
She then pulls a lever and wraps her chains around the lance causing it to vibrate rapidly drawing in large amounts of air and begins gyrating so fast that it creates friction that soon creates raging lightning, Haaaaaa!
On the other hand, Kira’s shield begins to emanate an eerie darkness that forms small energy particles around her body.
The particles move forward creating a barrier around her, the barrier is then condensed into a long dark blade flowing with dark energy.
The skulls on her head begin to laugh manically as they release flames that consume the blade the flames then wrap around her body and act as a booster. The two charge at each other with their Regalia propelling them forward with their auras clashing
They both scream out their attacks “Haaaaaaa! Take this ‘Valkyrie Aurora: Lancelot’ ‘Pandora’s Blight’” The two crash into each other with their attacks releasing an insurmountable amount of energy that causes immense damage to the dimension causing its foundations to crack.
The force of their attacks causes both of them to be blasted back several kilometers their armor becomes cracked in several spots and the injuries to their bodies escalates to severe levels and fatigue is beginning to set in.
Rika I want to know why do you want to kill Ace is it because he is a potential king? Do you hate him or love him I don’t understand what is your intention?
Of course I love him he’s my precious little cousin I just used Ryuu to test his power and to verify if what I learned about him is true. I found out that he absorbed the soul of a man named Aion who was a regalia user who was certain to become the new devil.
Aion? He was the legendary warrior who fought in the million-man war and won. I thought that was just a myth I never would have expected that he was real or that he was an emperor.
That’s right when he
inhabited Ace’s body the organization decided that it was best to kill Ace
because If Aion revives and regains his regalia he will definitely destroy the
world.
There’s no way to stop that from happening unless we seal away his power or
kill him and sealing his power won’t work forever so killing him is the only
option.
But I don’t want him to die so I have been protecting him until now with many excuses and explanations for why he shouldn’t die yet but they are getting restless.
I have been working nonstop to find a plausible solution to this problem but nothing comes to mind. So if there is no choice but to kill him I want to be the one to do it.
Why can’t we do this together? why didn’t you just come talk to me about this instead of doing it on your own?! You took that on all by yourself and even joined this organization to try and save him and you’re just going to give up without trying because you failed once.
Rika’s eyes are burning red with resentment she channels her anger into strength and sends flurries of slices and slashes at Kira.
Don’t *slash*talk like
*Clang*you know *Clatter* what I have been through!! I have been working
constantly to find a solution for a long time I couldn’t ask anyone for help
what do you think those bastards would have done to him if they found out.
Her slashes hit Kira’s shield with incredible force that sends heavy cracks and
ripples into it. The shield begins to weaken and slowly crumble but the lock in
the middle remains.
Rika you have to calm down us fighting isn’t going to solve anythin… *slice* While she is talking Rika charges in and sends multiple slices which Kira dodges clumsily losing her balance and then falling to the ground.
“Damn if I don’t beat her soon she is really going to kill me I guess I have no choice but to use that” She holds her hand up to the sky creating a black hole that summons a large black key. She shoves the black key into the Lock and turns it.
This results in a white mist emitting from the shield that summons a large twilight covered figure. The demon roars with extreme vigor unleashing a shockwave that rips through the wide dimension bringing further destruction to its foundations.
The demon shapes itself into a large ethereal woman. Your regalia isn’t the only one that has a human form. This is Vitri; she is my personal embodiment of the goddess of balance Vittoria.
The woman dons a large black shield, a blade and wings each filled with a massive amount of dark and light energy. The woman wears an armor with several feathers and scales adorning it.
The woman stands as a shadow and mirrors Kira’s movements precisely as if she were an extension of her own body. Kira takes her stance and she follows putting her blade and shield forward mimicking a scale.
Rika if you won’t calm down then I have no choice but to end this. I apologize for misunderstanding but that’s no reason for you to go berserk like that.
Shut your mouth! Abraxas it’s time to use that; full force give it everything you’ve got. throws several halos into the sky that form a large wheel of light. The wheel of light produces hundreds of Large lances and swords as large as helicopters and as bright as stars.
Her wings wrap around the wheel and spin it causing the weapons to release one by one. Each weapon producing an unending array of light Haaaaa! Valkyries Arsenal: Hyperion’s Bolt Wheel!!
“Vitri give me strength! Haaaaaa! Equilibrium Stance: Twilight’s Phantasm, she exclaims as Vitri places the sword inside the shield and turns it distorting the shield into a black hole. she then turns the sword and shield into a bow and arrow and compresses the black hole turning it into an arrow.
She aims and shoots sending
the arrow flying with incomparable speed; its gravity sucking in all matter and
space as it flies. The arrow sends an array of darkness and light that rips the
dimension apart.
The lights from the arrows clash with the swords and Lances creating an aurora
of black and white. An intense struggle ensues but Rika’s energy is beginning
to weaken and she can barely keep up her transformation.
Master you can’t keep this up for much longer your energy is beginning to fade; if you keep this up your soul is going to run dry and your body will begin to deteriorate at an accelerated pace.
Shut it I’ll stop when
she’s dead until then you just maintain your form and keep feeding me energy.
But I don’t have much energy left myself Master so we won’t be able to fight
for much longer; although it seems that she is in the same position. This will
be over in the next attack let’s hurry up and end this. Haaa!
“Kiraaaaaaaaa” “Rikaaaaaaaaaa” This is the end, they scream as they charge into
each other *Bang* with one final powerful clash that completely distorts,
cracks and finally destroys the created space.
When the smoke clears from their clash Rika is laid out in the middle of a giant crater that was created from the dimensions forming while Kira stands over her with fatigue.
“I didn’t want this to happen this could have all been avoided if you would have just told me what you were dealing with rather than keeping it bottled up. I hope that this has dealt with your pent up rage; although I doubt you can hear me. Huh? So are you going to kill me now?
Kira notices Abraxas
behind her holding her chains in the air. Not at all I just want you to know
that my master doesn’t hate you. I also want you to know that although the tone
of our battle was very serious I had a lot of fun facing you.
“Well I agree with that statement” “Gaaah, she cries as she falls to her knees
spurting blood and groaning in pain.
The darkness that
consumed her body left horrible burn marks and cuts on her skin and her eyes
were bloodshot.”
“Woah looks like using that regalia takes a pretty heavy toll on you your body
is covered in injuries and your bleeding like crazy, she says as she supports
her with her shoulder.
She then walks over to Rika and picks her injured body up and places it over her shoulder. “I’ll bring you two back to my home for treatment I can heal your injuries a lot quicker than any doctor or healer.
Can you really do that I highly doubt that, Kira says.
Uh okay not any doctor or healing but most of them. Well let’s get going, she says as she tries to hide her embarrassment. She then opens a portal and jumps into it appearing inside a large white room.
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First things first this review will be short since I'm not used to writing them!
But I honestly enjoyed this.
It does seem like a comic/TV program at some points but that's not a bad thing.
Some descriptions confused me but that may just be me...
Other than that it was interesting/ intriguing and pretty much unique.
Oh also some part where like "whatever the sentence is" he said
And a few where like whatever the sentence is he said
Bit confusing but agian may just be me..
But I did enjoy this
Hey Mloomps thanks for the review i sampled a few elements from some anime's, manga and light novels. I'm also still working on figuring out the whole he said and she said and all that stuff so for now it will be mostly confusing to everyone but me. Once again thanks for the review and i'm happy you enjoyed it.
Hello dracowave,

Humm... I feel like you are going to have a LOT of work trying to shape all this in a story because it is very visual, with all the fights and I think creating the right picture is the hardest part for a writer. I feel this is more appropriate as a anime script because you can have all the visual and listening effect to back up. Having said that I do hope and wish you are able to find the right way to create your own piece.
On another point, there was one thing that boder me. When you include Ace's cofession to Kira I think it's too out of no where, I do understand that you wanted that to be the reason why others thought Ace was pushing Kira to him and help him betray the others, but if you must use that reason then I think you should have them already in some sort of relationship or at least just imply that Ace likes Kira. And also because when you have them rebirth as humans the girl next to Ace is not Kira and she even is his family so we are lead to think Kira an Ace won't be romantically involved and that fact makes the cofession make less sense.
Even so I do like your ideas and the Regalias are incredibly awesome so good luck in your quest to create your story.
Thanks for the review and the wishes Pedro this is my first time writing a story so i of course have to work on finding my own style and flair. I'm hoping that when i finish it i can release it as a visual novel once i find a good team and then hopefully if any companies really like it they could make it into an anime. I know i have a lot to work on story and writing wise and as time passes i know ill get better at it. As for the confession part i wanted to add in at a later chapter what their relationship was but i didn't really know if it was a good idea to make it obvious that they liked each other at that point in the story or to add it in at a later point. Once i get further into the story i would like to have their relationship as humans become apparent as a sort of plot twist and although that may not be the best idea i can always fix it. Once again thank you for the review and i hope that both of our stories come out the way we want them to.
Yes I think adding the cofession later on would be best because your first chapters have full scale action and I love them so the cofession won't break the flow of action. Now that I know you want to pursue a visual novel I like the story even more because now you can have other writing styles that will for sure bring the best out of your story. If you want a little help on how to write a visual novel I would read light novels (I recommend baka tsuki).
Again, best of luck and hope to see your progression on the future.