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Hello KatieLou! First let me welcome you to YWS, hoping you'll enjoy it here as much as we all do! :D So about your story, I'm not exactly a fan ...

Hello EverWinter, here for a review. To be honest and even though I get the message from this short story, I have to say I really didn't like Haley's personality, ...

Hello writer12345! So first of all welcome to YWS and I hope you enjoy it here as much as we all do! :D Now onto your story. If I must ...

Hello emmaki, here for a review again! :D So like I said before I think these little pieces of information in the beginning, in the form of excerpts of ancient ...

Hello my1story (hehe nice name), first of all welcome to YWS and I wish for you to feel at home as much as we all do! :D Now straight to ...

Hello TheFantasy14, here for a review. :D So first of all congratulations on trying to aply to an arts school to pursue your dreams. Nowadays it's a very difficult thing ...

Hello Matthewj616, here for a review. :D I enjoyed this chapter quite a lot and your story seems very promising. You made your main character a believable 15 year old ...

Hello XxXTheSwordsmanXxX, once again you delivered it beautifully and amazingly. Your writing is rather impressive and you show amazing control over your own story. There were a few small mistakes ...

Hello again! So I don't have much to pick on because overall this chapter is very well written. I'm starting to like Re'ana more because even though she is a ...

Hello Anico146, here for a review. I like the premisse of your story, those last lines spike my curiosity like daggers and for a prologue they are enough because they ...

Hello again emmaki. So here we are left with more questions :D. For once we were under the impression that the girl from the prologue was going to be your ...

Hello SuperAnimalCrossing, here for a review. So, even though a little short, this is definitely intriguing and the suspense and mystery where well written. There are just two things I ...

Helo XxXTheSwordsmanXxX, here for a review. So I'll go and say right ahead that you're flawless with your descriptions, the reader gets a clear picture of the surroundings and the ...

Hello natsu2246 (another fairy tail lover ;D), welcome to YWS and I hope you can feel at home just as much as we all do! :D Now unto what really ...

Hello evalynne. So we have here a rather unusual and peculiar story. So much so that I cannot possibly tell you what is right or wrong because this is one ...