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Hi again! (God! Doesn't this girl stop?) ;) Ok, now this chapter is a real come back! It's very good and there's nothing to question about it. You even show ...

Hello again! And a review coming up... agaaiinn! ;) I liked your introduction of Rowan. Specialy the way you played her personality with that of a cat's. Even the girl's ...

Hello again! (I guess I'll be ending this Review Day with your story! ;)) The camp is here! Finally the real adventure is going to start! And it sure does ...

Hello again HolographicLadybug, here for another review! In this chapter Molly's character is strating to develop as you write about her agitated mind spirit and her loss for the camp. ...

Hello HolographicLadybug, here for a review! So the first thing I noticed between this chapter and the last one is that you slightly improved your writing. The descriptions seem to ...

Hello again Firelight, here for a review! So this time we have a mix between fantasy and spiritualty. It is a really sweet and peaceful story about life choices and ...

Hello Ivywater, here for a review! Even though there are quite a few grammar and punctuation mistakes, I still enjoyed this bit very much. The premise to your story and ...

Hello again tigeraye, here for yet another review| ;) I enjoyed this short story. It's filled with humor and it's an easy-going and light read. Nothing too complicated and even ...

Hello Zee6, here for a review! I must confess I wasn't really hyped up to continue reading this story (Please don't hate me!). The scene was pretty standard as it ...

Hello Messenger, here for a review! Pretty intense! You were able to create the image of war in a few words, yet very vividly. The reader gets a clear picture ...

Hello lizzybookclubqueen1, here for a review! So, I don't know if you intend on having this little bit as a prologue or a synopsis. Either way, it's purpose is to ...

Hello emmaki, here for a review! (Sorry I didn't made it sooner!) Yay! The moment we were all waiting for is almost coming! Because now we have clear confirmation that ...

Hello BlueJayWalker10, here for a review! As a lover of anything that screams fantasy I do have a few opinions about this first chapter. Don't get me wrong, it is ...

Hello tigeraye, here again for a review! Ok so your killer is definitly crazier than I thought. Like he said he kills with no thoughting through it, completely ignoring the ...

Hello ellmist, here for a review! This was such a delight to read! Your prespective of the muse is amazing, you let the reader see a muse by her own ...