corgisrock22

Thank you for your suggestions and critiquing! I will certainly keep this in mind next time I'm writing!

You were close on what a blue merle is! A blue merle is a coat color of a cardigan welsh corgi. This poem is about my Jamie, who i grew ...

Thank you for your kind words. I send my love to you and your family. I am very glad that my poem gave you some strength!

Thank you everyone for your kind words. I wrote this poem in late April, a few days after my beloved Jamie passed away. I was hesitant to actually publish this ...

Oh! I didn't know that! Hey you learn new things every day!

Thank you for the suggestions! This poem was based off of my experience when diving off a diving board. It usually to me feels like im flying, and its really ...

Just a reminder this isn't exactly a book or poem or anything.. Its just advice that i wanted to share with you guys.

This is beautiful, and very clever! I love the choice of color and the quote! This piece has so much emotion! It is absolutely beautiful! And i love the touch ...

This was very creative, and the minute i read this, i sensed the powerful message you implied for it to have. Its very hard to talk about this situation right ...

Thank you for writing this. Our conversation last night really helped me calm down. This whole situation in Orlando really shook me up, but when you wrote this, it helped ...

Hello!! I thought this poem was very unique and beautiful. It has such a beautiful tone to it. Also, I didn't see any grammar mistakes at all, good job!! Loved ...

At this point I do feel like giving up. I tried my best and I am slightly hurt by this.

I am sorry this was a disappointment to you.

I am not trying to copy rick Riordan's work, I am making a tribute to him because he is an amazing writer. His work has inspired me to begin this ...

Intresting.... The only mistake I found was that when you were talking about poppy brushing off the pinic blanket. You said t instead of it. what an interesting story, lol. ...