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Re: The Runner's Prayer
This was enjoyable. Usually I have such a downer attitude while reviewing, but this really satisfied me. Though I don't run, I can relate to the message that you are ...
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Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)
This is not what I find funny. The idea, in itself, is genius. I do find it that many others can laugh at it and I appreciate that. I do ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: I'm... A Dreamer
The last review was incorrect, I get harsh. This failed to impress me at all. I appreciate the metaphors and the egocentric personality of Winston, but that's not really a ...
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Re: An Ode to the Do'ers
Do'ers don't exist. Drop here, this wasn't something that I liked. You projected a very simple idea that has been said many many times and you made me read something ...
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Re: Amphitheater.
This was okay. I don't like how straight forward this is. I enjoy when the poet gets right to the point, but this left no room for imagination. You dictated ...
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Re: No No No
This wasn't deep. I don't like when people have egos in poetry. That's something that gets on my nerves. Yes, cool, you so know what we're doing wrong in life. ...
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Re: Dirty knees, cloudy skies
I liked this. It was clever, this senyru. I understand that this is a part of a "YWS MEME" so I guess all I can do is laugh. Don't know ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Ah ha ha I don't care
I don't what is what. I don't get the message of the poem. This honestly makes no sense to me. You don't do a good job at portraying your point. ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Love in a Glorious Pyre
Those below weren't wrong. You have an excellent image here, but what ruins it is your vocab. You seem to be poetic just to be poetic, nothing else. This could ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Cuts
Whoa. This was pure edgy. Drop here, and like a handful of my other reviews, I'm here to be harsh. Not as harsh as that one guy below, but still ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Inside of You
This lacks clarification. What is inside of him that you see? You need to clear that up. It would be pretty sick if hate was what you saw inside of ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Why?
I didn't like this for the following reasons. The biggest one is that this was very pretentious and you act like you know what to do, like you are above ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Does He Know?
If you tell him, he would. Here's the reasons why I found this okay: It was just one sentence and nothing much to it. It was straight forward, didn't dabble ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Happy Birthday YWS!
I don't like this for the following reasons. The first question is why. Why did you make this? It's supposed to be an endearing birthday poem but the rhyming reminds ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Dreams and Feelings
I don't like this. I'll tell you why. The rhyming really is elementary. You choose such simple words, battered shattered scattered tattered disaster (which BREAKS the rhyme pattern) haggard (have ...
Sep 27, 2015
