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Re: Just Clowning Around: Short Story; A piece of Rei’s Memory
Heyo, SkyJayde! Here to leave you a review~! Oof- like I said before, I feel bad for Rei, but at the same time, he's gone overboard. :( This memory is ...
Apr 30, 2023 -
Re: House of Blood: Part One: Chapter Five: Dont Blin- Too Late. You Blinked.
Hi!! I've been reading this story, but kept forgetting to leave a review or just didn't have time to... ;-; but I'm here now! The ending is honestly cute lol. ...
Apr 25, 2023 -
Re: Swords&shadows (unfinished)
Hi there! First of all, really interesting story, and this seems like a great start! I like the descriptions in this chapter. They're very detailed and vivid, especially when you ...
Apr 19, 2023 -
Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Ch. 1.2
*Falls in through the roof* AYoo, I am here! Very happy to see another chapter of Rei's story, woohoo! :D I really like the descriptions of Rei's smile, and it ...
Apr 19, 2023 -
Re: I Knew Chapter 2
Hi there! I'm here to leave a review! First off, RIP to the black SUV. X_X The ending built a lot of suspense, and I'm guessing they're gonna find dead ...
Apr 13, 2023 -
Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Ch. 1.1
REEEE I'm super late to leave a review T_T but I'm here now! This chapter is very interesting and thrilling. I'm not gonna lie, I enjoy reading from Rei's perspective. ...
Apr 11, 2023 -
Re: Wetfire- chapter 11
Ayoo, that's so cute!! Tbh food IS a priority even if it's the end of the world, so I can't blame them hahaha. But hopefully they do remember to save ...
Apr 11, 2023 -
Re: Wetfire-chapter 10
Ohh yes, I remember this story!! Really good job on this chapter as well, I love the figurative language and the twist at the end. Poor Snowfall and Silver just ...
Apr 11, 2023 -
Re: King of the Court - 9
Hi theree! First off, it's clear you're a really experienced writer, and I think you did awesome with building tension in the story! The number scores, the thoughts, and the ...
Apr 6, 2023 -
Re: The love of a family
Hi Rinisha! Here to leave a review! And I gotta say, I agree with all the other comments that this story is really heartwarming.
Apr 6, 2023 -
Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Prologue
Helloo, I am here! (And I'm not gonna lie, I almost got a heart attack from that cover picture-) Anyways, jumping into the story. I really like the descriptions that ...
Apr 4, 2023 -
Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 3.1
Hiii! This was an interesting read, and the worldbuilding at the start is great! I love how the swans' story was told as a fairytale to Solea by her father; ...
Mar 28, 2023 -
Re: I love (hate) you, father (William’s song for Lucas)
Hii! This is a really nice song/poem, and I also like the hidden messages. The lyrics are simple but spooky, and judging by how innocently sweet the non-parentheses lyrics sound, ...
Mar 26, 2023 -
Re: In the elevator: With myself (part 2)
Hi there! I'm cookiesandcream :D So far I've read this and chapter 1, and both were very enjoyable to read! I like the idea of Kara meeting her past and ...
Mar 22, 2023 -
Re: House of Blood: Part One: Chapter Zero ( Characters and Introductions)
Ooh! This sounds like it's gonna be a cool story. Horror, survival, and romance? Count me in >:) So far, the characters and worldbuilding seem detailed and well-planned. Looks like ...
Mar 17, 2023
