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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Just Clowning Around: Short Story; A piece of Rei’s Memory

    Heyo, SkyJayde! Here to leave you a review~! Oof- like I said before, I feel bad for Rei, but at the same time, he's gone overboard. :( This memory is ...

    Sun Apr 30, 2023 4:52 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: House of Blood: Part One: Chapter Five: Dont Blin- Too Late. You Blinked.

    Hi!! I've been reading this story, but kept forgetting to leave a review or just didn't have time to... ;-; but I'm here now! The ending is honestly cute lol. ...

    Tue Apr 25, 2023 2:10 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Swords&shadows (unfinished)

    Hi there! First of all, really interesting story, and this seems like a great start! I like the descriptions in this chapter. They're very detailed and vivid, especially when you ...

    Wed Apr 19, 2023 9:53 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Ch. 1.2

    *Falls in through the roof* AYoo, I am here! Very happy to see another chapter of Rei's story, woohoo! :D I really like the descriptions of Rei's smile, and it ...

    Wed Apr 19, 2023 9:23 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 2

    Hi there! I'm here to leave a review! First off, RIP to the black SUV. X_X The ending built a lot of suspense, and I'm guessing they're gonna find dead ...

    Thu Apr 13, 2023 1:32 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Ch. 1.1

    REEEE I'm super late to leave a review T_T but I'm here now! This chapter is very interesting and thrilling. I'm not gonna lie, I enjoy reading from Rei's perspective. ...

    Tue Apr 11, 2023 3:17 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Wetfire- chapter 11

    Ayoo, that's so cute!! Tbh food IS a priority even if it's the end of the world, so I can't blame them hahaha. But hopefully they do remember to save ...

    Tue Apr 11, 2023 3:00 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Wetfire-chapter 10

    Ohh yes, I remember this story!! Really good job on this chapter as well, I love the figurative language and the twist at the end. Poor Snowfall and Silver just ...

    Tue Apr 11, 2023 1:11 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: King of the Court - 9

    Hi theree! First off, it's clear you're a really experienced writer, and I think you did awesome with building tension in the story! The number scores, the thoughts, and the ...

    Thu Apr 06, 2023 3:11 am
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The love of a family

    Hi Rinisha! Here to leave a review! And I gotta say, I agree with all the other comments that this story is really heartwarming.

    Thu Apr 06, 2023 2:21 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Prologue

    Helloo, I am here! (And I'm not gonna lie, I almost got a heart attack from that cover picture-) Anyways, jumping into the story. I really like the descriptions that ...

    Tue Apr 04, 2023 1:27 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 3.1

    Hiii! This was an interesting read, and the worldbuilding at the start is great! I love how the swans' story was told as a fairytale to Solea by her father; ...

    Tue Mar 28, 2023 12:47 am
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: I love (hate) you, father (William’s song for Lucas)

    Hii! This is a really nice song/poem, and I also like the hidden messages. The lyrics are simple but spooky, and judging by how innocently sweet the non-parentheses lyrics sound, ...

    Sun Mar 26, 2023 7:32 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: In the elevator: With myself (part 2)

    Hi there! I'm cookiesandcream :D So far I've read this and chapter 1, and both were very enjoyable to read! I like the idea of Kara meeting her past and ...

    Wed Mar 22, 2023 2:09 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: House of Blood: Part One: Chapter Zero ( Characters and Introductions)

    Ooh! This sounds like it's gonna be a cool story. Horror, survival, and romance? Count me in >:) So far, the characters and worldbuilding seem detailed and well-planned. Looks like ...

    Fri Mar 17, 2023 1:56 am


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