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Hello! I noticed that you're new to YWS. I wanted to say welcome, and I hope this review doesn't in anyway deter you from the site and most definitely not ...

Oh. How pretty. Haha. Hello! Gummies here. It's lovely. With such depth and a morbid kind of beauty. I like the random indent before "without a heartbeat", as if it ...

Wow. Hmm. First off, hello! Gummies here. I thought this was wonderful, if a little confusing. But that's what peer reviewing is for, right? Constructive criticism.(: Now, to get down ...

Gosh, what a lovely piece of poetry. I love the rather symbolic relationship you made between the weight of the ocean and the weight, the "pressure" of fitting-in in the ...

The story told was very cute. I enjoyed. Hehe(: Now. To get down to the nitpicks, shall we? It wasn't bad, but with every other work out in the world, ...

I hadn't read the other chapters, so granted this review might prove slightly irrelevant. I thought the story (of what I've seen of it) was interesting enough. The characters intrigued ...

Hello! Interesting story, but I'd like to offer some helpful points? 1. Sentence structure. 2. Punctuation. 3. Spelling. A few sentences stuck out to me, but I'll only bring attention ...

Eeps. I forgot to mention this before, but I don't really consider myself very well-versed in poetry. I only read people like Frost and Dickinson and Cummings at leisure. So, ...

Hello! Wow, what to say. So, I thought it was an interesting piece. It was different, in that it read more like poetry (in my mind) than it did prose. ...

So... I will start reading and quoting/commenting on the way. My opinion will be at the end, kay? Kay.(: Hope I don't come off too harsh or whatnot. If you ...

Hello!(: So sorry for the delay, but here's that review you asked for... P.S. Since I'm feeling lazy, I'll paste the whole thing here and insert my comments in red ...

First off, I just wanted to say that this reminds me of 1984 . Haha And I don't see any grammatical/punctuation errors. The only thing I really saw was: "In ...

This was... lovely. Just lovely. The ending was extremely heartbreaking, and the build to it was wonderful and really well done! Favorite line: "His lips were slightly parted, the way ...

Very emotional. Love the story it tells. All I want to point out is did you actually mean "what a fucked up lie"? Or was that supposed to be "life"? ...

This was absolutely amazing! Such a lovely, fun work to read. The way you set the stage is honestly what enchanted me and kept me reading. You can paint a ...