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Hey there! I think this is a nicely written piece. I did not expect the ending, to be honest. I was hoping for there to be no death. But it ...

Awesome poem! I liked this all and here's why: it's fun. Also, there's an actual moral or lesson to be taken away from here after reading. Don't let any residing ...

Hey! Nice poem you got there! Your use of imagery was great! It has a sort of vividness that I appreciate so much. I admire poets like you that can ...

Hey there. I want to start off by saying that I really enjoyed your short story. Your MC seems like a tough person. Tough in a good way, I mean. ...

I have to agree with the MC. That was a weird question to be asking considering the situation they were in. I don't understand the relationship between the two. It ...

Hey Tabitha! :] So I have to say, I didn't know what to expect. Very nice premise. The detailing in this piece was wonderful. I admire people who can write ...

I’m super interested in learning more about the people of DeusTerra. I’m even more interested in learning about why Earth was abandoned in the first place. What happened there to ...

I have to say, this was a very interesting piece. Very creepy to think about. Why would someone try to kill him in this way? And who would that person ...

ohmygod. alex was being mean ): poor anita, but it's awesome she's not doing what he wants her to do (leave.) (GOD I LOVE HER.) i still can't get over ...

hsghsdjhb; okay, esther. i know i'm super late and all. and you're probably thinking, "oh god, where'd SHE come from? i thought she was dead!" but i have my reasons: ...

Aw, poor Alex. ): Her crush saw her wallpaper (of him) AND her tummy hurts? You can't help but feel bad for the girl. But I do like this. (: ...

1. I opened my eyes then closed and the n again as the sunlight blinded me from my open window. i thought adding the word and made it flow better. ...

hey, there, pawprint. i thought that this was piece was pretty good and straight to the point, but i've noticed a few things within this work: 1. Someone surely must ...

woo, chapter three! wow, she's dreaming about him. hmm. i liked this chapter, a lot, and i'm glad that you updated! i keep wondering if that girl he was kissing ...

hello! i'll start off by saying: i love your writing style. the beginning was great with the whole hands thing. it drew me in, and i was caught. i only ...