colie18

wow I really like this. It kept me entertained the whole time! I enjoyed it very much!!! I found it interesting and no grammar or spelling mistakes at all! :)

Thank You all! And yes it is a true story of my mothers battle with cancer. She died when I was 4 years old on Christmas. Thank You! I am ...

After reading your poem here, I am at loss of words. This was beautifully written and even better with a picture to go along. This was inspiring and I absolutely ...

Hello! I loved this poem! Its meaning struck me easily. You had a few spelling mistakes but otherwise I loved it. XOXO colie18

I like the poem, although that pain that you are trying to show in the piece is long overdue, you lag on getting to the point. I like the poem ...

WOW!!! its story was compelling and just beautifully written!! The rhythm was perfect and the point of the story was direct! I love it!!!! Keep on writing!!

I like it the way its written and everything, but I feel like I have heard it before, its like some others I have read before. But keep writing

I really like it, and just how everything flows perfectly together!! Keep writing

Wow!! I mean... it flowed soo perfectly and it caught my attention just from the first line. WOW!!! I really do like it, please keep writing!!

Great poem! Definitely something to make you think! I liked how you used more sophisticated words! it helps. Keep Writing! Good Luck! feel free to message me with any questions! ...

VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN... I loved the whole deepness of the story. keep on writing. colie18

well writin.. very well done.. i love it.. keep writing keep up the good work

awesome.... imagery and awesome words used... keep writing