I was wrong

by Iamnotperfect

Published November 3, 2010

I judged you
but I was wrong
my mistakes aren't few
don't know why it took me long.

My eyes were cold
when I didn't know I was wrong
when I wasn't told
why did it take me so long.

To be in your position
hard must have been
to loose my affection
how could I have seen.

I forgive but I don't forget
taking you for a liar
loosing my respect
I am not a denier.

I misenterpreted your words
what a mistake
from then onwards
to me you was just fake.

But I didn't know
that to you I meant a lot
it was like being hit by an arrow
at the time I lost the plot.

My bad thoughts suck me in
I should have confirmed my assumptions
that was such a sin
forgive me for my actions.

And when I finally spoke out
not afraid to tell you the truth
there was no more doubt
that I was in the wrong and not you.

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colie18
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colie18 commented Comment · Nov 3, 2010

Wow!! I mean... it flowed soo perfectly and it caught my attention just from the first line. WOW!!! I really do like it, please keep writing!!

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MikaFreak123
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MikaFreak123 commented Comment · Nov 3, 2010

I can not express how amazing this is. The flow, the rhyme EVERYTHING was perfect, I can honestly relate to this too. I love it, really please keep writing in the future, this is really really great.



Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
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