Published November 3, 2010
I judged you
but I was wrong
my mistakes aren't few
don't know why it took me long.
My eyes were cold
when I didn't know I was wrong
when I wasn't told
why did it take me so long.
To be in your position
hard must have been
to loose my affection
how could I have seen.
I forgive but I don't forget
taking you for a liar
loosing my respect
I am not a denier.
I misenterpreted your words
what a mistake
from then onwards
to me you was just fake.
But I didn't know
that to you I meant a lot
it was like being hit by an arrow
at the time I lost the plot.
My bad thoughts suck me in
I should have confirmed my assumptions
that was such a sin
forgive me for my actions.
And when I finally spoke out
not afraid to tell you the truth
there was no more doubt
that I was in the wrong and not you.
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Wow!! I mean... it flowed soo perfectly and it caught my attention just from the first line. WOW!!! I really do like it, please keep writing!!
I can not express how amazing this is. The flow, the rhyme EVERYTHING was perfect, I can honestly relate to this too. I love it, really please keep writing in the future, this is really really great.