Salty

by lluvialover

Published March 20, 2010

I am addicted to you, Salty
Every time you leave me
First,
with a grain of salt melting on my tongue
Next,
sparkling in my hair
Finally,
you scatter all about me,
Diamonds burning in the sun
I see in your reflection.

I press against your pebbly skin
Waiting to be flooded over again
Come again wave,
I am not afraid
And similar to horse,
I find my minerals in you
You still persist,
You come back in every tear
Prickling, healing, kissing, killing
Every skin cell.
I am addicted to you, Salty.

note* to clarify the line about the horse, I know that since horses cannot get salts from their regular food, they have to lick salt separately to get all the necessary minerals.

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crescent
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crescent commented Comment · Mar 24, 2010

:) Your poem made me smile. Salty is awesome.

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colie18
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colie18 commented Comment · Mar 24, 2010

well writin.. very well done.. i love it..

keep writing
keep up the good work



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