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Re: Dear Juliet...
Really good start I know what you mean, R and J were both stupid and melodramatic and wimpy I'm interested to see your take on this legendary story More please? ...
Oct 2, 2009 -
Re: why falling in love is a monumentally awful idea.
Heyyyy I liked this It was different, quirky, random and downright crazy Loved the feeling behind it though, it spoke to me directly Sounded like a person actually speaking in ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: What he doesn't know
Hey there :) I liked this poem, I think a lot of people have felt this way, like they're keeping stuff from someone they love and that they feel as ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: I'll Always Be Weak
I really liked this. Sadly, I know exactly how you feel. Betrayal is the worst pain of all, that people inflict upon us. To Hell with the guy who did ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: This Is What I Wish I Could Say To You [1]
Hey Sofi First of all, I'd like to say that I won't criticise this in terms of grammar etc because it is, in my opinion, completely correct in terms of ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: Twilight : The real story
Although I understand people's comments about it not 'flowing' etc, I liked it. If you take it for what it is, (in short a 'p***-take') it's actually quite funny. This ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: Pretty Little China Doll
That was awesome I'm actually a little spooked right now I used to have China dolls that my Grandma gave me, but I had to give them away because they ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: It only gets worse - chapter 1 - adapted :)
I really liked this. Not one hundred percent accurate grammatically but whose is? I liked how you portrayed an embarrassing mum, we can ALL relate to that, that's for sure. ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: Cramps
haha feel the pain. males of the world Next time you're like 'don't be so overdramatic' feel the snake within-ok that sounded wrong but hey I really liked this, who ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Rules don't exist
I like it-random as heck that's what I like to see It's free-verse for all you cretins who say it has no structure I like it The lack of structure ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Do You?
I think everyone has been so harsh, love I liked this poem muchly, yeah ok it was about 'typical teen stuff' but in all fairness don't they say 'write what ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: My Rant About How Stephenie Meyer Annoys Me
I really don't like this poem Partly because I Love Twilight but also because it lacks depth, structure and a point really. Stephenie will NEVER read this and as for ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: The play called "Our Life"
I really liked this song the whole idea of a life bing a play is fitting-sometimes we pretend, sometimes we make mistakes But the worst thing is when you realise ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Let Me Count The Ways
I'll twist up in literature and linen Take note what others have said Embrace my warm postion and read about poetry instead. ANY GOOD? Sorry if it's not, but I ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: How Could You?
I love this poem I know how you feel, if this is based on real life events. I love the accusing yet philosophical tone of this poem and how easy ...
Oct 29, 2008
