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oh i didnt expect that lol, thank you!

Oh hello there! And thank you for the review and compliment for the poem, I very much appreciate it! I understand you're only trying to help, I do apologize for ...

.... I do agree with "why" as being one of the most painful and surprising questions ever, and I also agree that it'll negatively impact you too. But also, thank ...

Oh thank you for the compliments and kind words! I do agree with the fact of adding more detail on my poems, that's something I need to work on a ...

Ah thank you for stopping by, and thank you for the quick tips! And I will take my time to improvise my poems, this one definitely needs some grammar and ...

Gosh, this is so adorable and sweet, I love it!

Hey hey hey, ooh I love your username! (that rhymes lol). I'm glad and happy that you enjoyed my poem, and the song too, the song deserves all the credit! ...

Hi there drflapjack, I'm glad to see you critiquing on my work, and I'm happy that you enjoyed it! So far with my poems I usually write them from personal ...

Hi there, and thank you so much for posting a review and critique, it means so much to me! I never realized it that the poem sounded like the girl ...

Possibly one of my favorite poems on YWS. I don't favor much, but this earns a spot. I'm in love with the choice of words you chose and how you ...

? Did you mean to say something, or was this just a program error?

Simply beautiful, although there's a few minor spelling errors, but it's alright. This painted a beautiful image in my head.

Oooh, I really like this poem, although I think replacing some word choices such as "walk a white sand beach" would be better, I do like the simplicity and minimalism ...