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ah thank you so much for the review, it's very helpful and i've taken note of the repetition of words and such, so thank you for giving me some extra ...

Hiya Elijah and thank you for the review! It's very helpful and I've noticed a lot of things about my writing ever since you showed many examples from the piece. ...

Hiya dude and you're welcome man, I'm glad that you appreciate it!

Ah alright, looking into the rhyming scheme is a bit interesting. To clarify what I was saying in the poem I wrote out : "The distance between us started to ...

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Hiya Jimss and to answer question yes many of my "romantic" or sentimental pieces are based on events or experiences in my life that I have witnessed. Oh short reviews ...

Oh I actually didn't plan for this to be a novel, I wasn't sure how to categorize short stories when I was submitting this but oh well. Yeah I get ...

Hi Scarlett and don't worry I understand, I was typing this while I just got done studying so I understand your fatigue. Yeah I do get your reasoning on why ...

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You're welcome! And I'm glad you found my advice helpful!

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Ah hi dude and welcome!!! Holy cow dude, thank you so much for the critique about the rhyme scheme. I reread it and looked into your advice and it does ...

Hey there, thanks for stopping by and reviewing my work! Oh I'm glad that you love the message of this poem, I'm happy that you like it! And I agree ...

Thank you! Ah, that's alright. Alright, I'll fix up or review the poem over to reevaluate it but thank you for telling me! And yeah, I added that quote on ...

Yes I agree Miyazaki is amaze, I also love your profile picture !! Oh I see about the punctuation, thank you so much for pointing it out! I'll add more ...