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coehl

keep it simple, stupid.

  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Sometimes adults..

    Hi there, coehl here! To begin this review I want to say that this whole commentary or narrative about adult life or human life overall, is very interesting and it's ...

    Feb 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: judgement

    Hi man I just wanted to begin my review with the fact that your overall concept is very well done and projected a good image in my mind. Your message ...

    Feb 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Self Inside the Self

    Howdy there Coehl is here !!! I want to say that you're an amazing person. The fact that you've gone through so much (or the narrator has, if this isn't ...

    Jan 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Oh Hell Yes

    Hey there! Coehl here! I just want to say that this is a very gorgeous and touching poem and I feel like it's a bit more "realistic" and a tad ...

    Jan 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: From Silence to Symphony

    Ay there Coehl here! I would like to say that I absolutely adore this poem, and you did a great job writing it! In this poem I love how you ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: No Mo[u]rning

    Hey there, poem-loving Coehl is here! This isn't a "sophisticated" or "professional" review or anything, just to let you know, but I do have a few words to say about ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Your Eyes

    Hey there, coehl here! First off, I love this poem already, even from the very first stanza. It helped me paint pictures in my head! To me, this poem is ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Hunter

    Hi there, coehl here. I do like your short story or poem in a sense, but I feel like some minor grammar mistakes were made that could confuse the reader. ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: triboluminescence

    The poem overall is very lovely and highly emotional. Though at first while I was reading, this was a very confusing "short" story I had read through, maybe it was ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Red

    Wooahhh, even tho I've already read this, I can't help but think these are one of those poems that just gives you a lightbulb moment. I really like how it ...

    Nov 9, 2015


I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights