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Blue eyes and red hair are caused by a mutation, too.

NO WHY WOULD U DO THAT (tbh I was busy and on mobile when I first got ur pm so I kinda forgot to read it) I'll try to review ...

I like the changes to the last lines of the stanzas! Although I think I take back what I said about the first lines- it sounds weird to just jump ...

No, doesn't work. Try using "shift" and "enter" at the same time. Works for me.

Yo, sorry to butt in, but I thought I'd comment on the formatting: it's not that writers don't want to put their poems in stanzas, but sometimes YWS formatting screws ...

Sweet poem! I see my investment into the GPMPS foundation was well spent XD

oh, that makes sense XD Thanks!

I don't think you quite got the meaning I was going for- This poem isn't about saying that internet is a fantasy world, it's saying that the internet is just ...

Yesss, you understood my capitalization and punctuation perfectly.

Thanks! Capitalization and punctuation were left out intentionally. It's a stylistic choice. (:

I'll be sure to! :P

Thank uuuuu

"capitalization promotes capitalism" omg XD I might steal that

Hey, just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. It's so interesting.

Thanks for reviewing! 1. Actually, we used the correct form of "its", so we won't be changing it. 11. Wait, are you saying that "at least" is one word? Because ...