cleverclogs

Happy review day! As you requested, I'm going to ignore capitalization, especially since the lack of it is intentional, and review content. I had to read this several times, only ...

Hello niteowl, and happy review day! Wow, this is a really excellent poem! It's sweet and melancholy, and very emotional. The rhythm and rhyme mostly worked, except for in the ...

Hello, and happy review day! Oh my gosh! This is hilarious! The rhythm mostly works, except for the few spots that the previous reviewer pointed out. I like the repetition ...

Hello, and happy review day! Let's start off with something I liked. I enjoyed the simplicity of this poem. It's very straightforward and doesn't use much figurative language, but I ...

Hello! Again, you have written a very emotional poem. Neither of my parents were ever in the military, so I can't really relate, but I still love this poem. I ...

Hello, and happy review day! So, I didn't know the definition of spaghettification before I started reading this, but I think that your poem conveys the definition all right. As ...

Hello again, Tulip! So, seeing as all the grammatical nitpicks have been pointed out, it's up to me to review content! Now, firstly, this poem seems a little harsh on ...

Hello again, GreenTulip! Now, like ArcticMonkey said, I feel like with a little bit more backstory being revealed in this chapter, the first one isn't even necessary. The first chapter ...

Hello, there, and happy Review Day! So, first of all, your idea seems intriguing, although there's not really a plot so far that I can see. But that's okay, it's ...

Hello there, cleverclogs here to review! Overall, I liked your writing style, although there are a few things that could use work. For instance, you write in present tense for ...

Let's see. I had to read this poem a few times to get what you were trying to convey, but I might understand now. I'm going to focus on grammar ...

Wow, this is really good! It speaks of lost friendship very well. I love the last stanza, because it shows that you love the friend enough to let them go. ...

Hmmm, pretty good for a five-minute poem! :) Something that struck me while I was reading this: H appiness is when A couple loves each other I just think that ...

Well, I think that Crimsona pretty much covered all the grammatical nitpicks, so I'm not going to bother with that. Now, onto content: Oh. My. Gosh. This is amazing. It's ...

Hello, I'm here to review! So, overall, I really liked this piece. It was very heartfelt and emotional, and it conveyed the plight of your two characters very well. I'm ...