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Re: Goodbye Raven
This feels very heartfelt and sincere, especially in the way it uses the raven as both a symbol and a real person being remembered. The imagery is simple but effective, ...
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Re: Growing up feels glamorously grotesque
This poem did a really good job capturing the fear and uncertainty that comes with growing older and constantly wanting more out of life. The reflective tone feels genuine, and ...
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Re: ?Angel? Two separate poems that go together i want advice on. are they any good?
There’s a really strong sense of looking upward and wanting something better here—like clouds aren’t just clouds, they’re freedom or peace or even heaven itself. The beginning feels almost chi
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Re: 99.5
I like how you use body-horror imagery to explore emotional emptiness and loss. The metaphors you used are vivid, unsettling, and effective in tone. Some of the symbolism is abit ...
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Re: The Price of Love
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May 16, 2026
I love how the poem's gentle tone make the grief hit harder, especially in the final lines where the speaker still hopes for reconciliation despite everything. Some emotions are stated ... -
Re: The Quiet Habit
This feels very personal and grounded, especially in the way it traces a quiet but steady sense of wanting to be “useful” rather than impressive. The small early details, like ...
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Re: Death of a Showgirl: Taylor Swift, Womanhood, and Labor Production
I love how your essay uses examples from theory and culture, including Taylor Swift, to show how emotional expression and femininity can become profitable under capitalism. This helps make the ...
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Re: it is said, in sickness & in health
I like how the poem focuses not just on love itself, but on the fear of being “stuck” in a relationship where distance and resentment could slowly grow and the ...
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Re: Effortless Effect
I love how u present love using different metaphors like candy, color, flowers, voice, and touch to show how complex and contradictory love can feel, and how each section explores ...
May 14, 2026
