childofApollo777

I think that this poem is a teeny tiny bit confusing but other than that beautiful. I think it is really nice how you made it so that your character ...

She is a goddess in Greek mythology and, I do keep a writers journal and I do want to write. She doesn't guard the skies her fallen comrades do and ...

She is a goddess in Greek mythology and, I do keep a writers journal and I do want to write. She doesn't guard the skies her fallen comrades do and ...

thank you a lot for this review because I think it will help later on, and in a few days I;m going to submit something in the poetry section about ...

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WOW!! This poem is really touching. You have a really nice way with words and this was a good poem. It is really amazing how you used scientific words to ...

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I think that you should continue the story because so far it is very intriguing. You have a very nice way of placing certain phrases in the correct places. I ...

I really like this poem because I have read many of the legends of king Arthur. I also found that you spelled the word "prophecy" incorrectly. It was very interesting ...

cool poem

This poem is really amazing and kind of makes you think about war. You think about the consequences of it and how many people die for their country. It makes ...

I think that this poem is really amazing,because you use a lot of metaphors.