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Hi! This is an excellent poem and I really like the imagery you use. The way you use asterisks helps and a good pattern and flow to this piece, which ...

Wow, it is almost hard to believe that you have not written poem in long time, because this is really well done! I am fond of the way that you ...

Hi Rachel-chan! I said I would review your stuff when I find the time, so here I am! Please forgive me if I nitpick, or point out something you may ...

Dear kohai, Greetings! I am quite fond of this short story you have written, and I really like how well you have written it! Overall, the ideas represented in the ...

Dear CandyWizard, I am amazed at the time and effort you must have put into this. Although the rhymes don't follow a specific pattern, and the language is repetitive in ...

Dear weirdbookworm, I must say, I am quite fond of this poem of yours! The only two complaints I have is the lack of punctuation and one little line. The ...

Dear emmylou1995, This is a magnificent story! I love the way you have described the many images and scenes from that horrible goblin market! Each word brings a picture into ...

Dear Gravity, Good job on this most excellent work of yours! Your descriptions are very vivid, and definitely bring an image into the reader's mind! I am also quite fond ...

Dear Margauxalchem, nice story! Although I think the plotline is okay, the little story you have here needs a lot of work. You have many spelling, punctuation, and wording errors, ...

Dear Niamh12, Dude, this is really and truly quite amazing! I love the way you never tell their names, which makes sure that, although you see the various people, you ...

Dear AsYetUntitled, This is a very interesting and funny idea, and quite enjoyable. However, there are A LOT of mistakes here as well. First off, don't bring up the phrase ...

Hey, this is pretty cool. 12, 11,6,2,17, and 20 are life for me. Just a few others that I've discovered: If your going to be smart, try not to do ...

Dear Purple, I think the idea of giving a poem to your boyfriend is quite the admirable thing to do, so here is the review you asked for. Please forgive ...

Dear JoytheBrave, you are truly a master of words. Although this is short, it is so very, very true. It speaks to the heart in ways a longer poem can ...

Hello Snoink, congrats on being upgraded to pigs! I like your little work, even if it is only two sentences. I don't entirely understand why you posted it, but as ...