chetanbhasin

I appreciate the emotions that you are trying to bring up with this short story, but I wouldn't really call it a short story. It seems more like a part ...

Hi, I'm here to review your word as I told. So here I go... All had been quiet in Isabella’s life, maybe that was because she was in a coma. ...

Hey! This is Chetan here. Umm..! Not one of the four Musketeers. I don't think if I can be of much help on this work but still I will try ...

Hi LawsonJ, it is Chetan here. I shall be reviewing your work today. As you said that it was a quick work without any planning I will go accordingly. Theme ...

Hi there! You have got a great hold on the topic you are trying to explain. I can see that you have already rectified most of the errors in grammar ...

Hi there skins! It is Chetan here. You have got a very good story here. I see it had been running for a long time, I just saw it and ...

Hey! Once again, I loved this one but there are a few things that I figured out in this part. "Oh, gentelman, who's this?" He asks Anotnio and Mark with ...

Hiya! This is Chetan Again. Once again, I am here to review your work. First of all, you are using short form of words here. Like you are using "Who ...

Hi Kay! This is Chetan here, and I have something to say about your work here. As Lava told in a review on the previous chapter, your chapters are very ...

Hi! Sorry for being late in this review but I had to do a lot of work in no time. So let us begin with this. I'm not good at ...

Hi there! Thanks for your review on my work, I thought of having a look at your work which I think is great. So, I will be reviewing you today, ...

Hi! I liked this one, but don't you think it would be better if you expand it. I don't say that you expand it on cost of loosing the meaning ...

Hi! Well, your story was a little weird and I would you've put it into general fiction, I think posting it in fantasy will be better. I don't know what ...

I agree with smashles. You start your poem with one separate line and then there is three line para. Also, another para is four lined and you end the poem ...

As "thegirlandthepen" has already described almost everything I would not go in whole details. But there is one thing that I always notice in your writings. See, when you put ...