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Re: Black Hearts
The first stanza is definitely one of my favorites in any poem! The way you just started out with a blow was some thing not a lot of poets can ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Eight
Okay I would just like to note that the description for this work is literally what brought me to this piece alone. Well, I read this and then read the ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 9 part 1; Ky, A Hop
I have been following this story and I kept meaning to write a review! Well here I am! First of all I would like to say that the plot was ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: I'll make Writers out of you
Funny story: I was watching mulan last night singing the song all the way! I feel fate has brought me to the front page! This was such a creative idea ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: Water Nymph
You have done it again! I love this poem! Sure it was dramatic, bit in a realistic way not TV drama way. I enjoyed it very much and it caught ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Angel of Stone
Hello servant! Took a break from your duties to write poems? I will have no nonsense! Get back and pour me more tea! Okay first off I would like to ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: opposite
Very emotional and yet so subtle. I liked the way the poem flowed right out of you, like a true narration of the heart. It was deep and short. Pretty, ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Butterfly! Part two..
Okay first I would like to say, I really enjoyed chapter one! It is a nice more new book and has a fresh clean feeling. It seems like the author ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Race of Numbers : Chapter 1
Now apologies, this is typed on an ipad so many mistakes and typos will be made! This is a wonderful start to a novel and I'm impressed with how well ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Waiting
wow. this left a mark. the words of this poem litterally hit you. each word spins the questions around in you head...each question arises another. i really enjoyed this and ...
Feb 16, 2014 -
Re: Lover's Spit Left On Repeat
beautiful! you took the song by lorde and have it a whole new meaning! i enjoyed readong and really think poetry should be more like this! it is short enough ...
Feb 16, 2014 -
Re: Next Door (Chapter One)
well sarah, it has been done again. i am in love with this book! i love every single bit of it! you keep the reader on thier toes. not only ...
Feb 16, 2014 -
Re: The Shifties: Chapter 1 - Lost
attack on titan anyone? sorry i just had to make that reference! i personally loved this chapter. i wonder why this is still in the green room! i enjoyed reading ...
Feb 16, 2014 -
Re: Alas, Romeo!
Aha! This gives a more cheerful and happy retelling of Williams work! I smiled I even uttered a chuckle! I love the way this is short and sweet. It almost ...
Feb 15, 2014 -
Re: Brightness of the Night
Wow. This is an amazing piece of work! I love how you are able to relate to the narrator, but also add a majestic way that seems untouchable! I very ...
Feb 15, 2014
