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Re: I can't see through this blindfold god help me
I was intrigued just reading the title. You set this piece up wonderfully. I enjoy the ups and downs depicted right from the start. Structurally, the stanzas are not too ...
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: The Girl Pt. 1
awe thank you so much! glad it was enjoyable to read! (:
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: emptY
Thank you for this review! To start, The Shield of Achilles is a reference to the Homer's The Illiad (: Also, you are right in this sense, this poem was ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: As I Look Back In Anger
Wow. Honestly, I was hooked from the beginning. This is my type of poetry and the emotion you created blossomed beautifully as it progressed. The structure is spread out enough, ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: The Girl
Hello, thank you for taking the time to review my piece! The capitalization is because I copy and pasted this from my tumblr that I had written on my phone ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: The Girl
You guessed right! This is just the beginning and when I first came about this idea, I wanted to right a FULL blown novel but for right now I'm just ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: Love Before The Counterrevolutionaries Came
I appreciate all of this! thank you for your time (:
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: sour
I have a tumblr with writing if you'd like to check it out on your spare time. It is the same as my name on here, and thank you so ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: sour
thank you, thank you! and i totally spaced the font so your suggestion for it is much appreciated!
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: A Different Tomorrow
Hello, cpedro! I have stumbled across your poem and boy am I glad I did. First, I'm going to start with your structure. I love poems with a nice structure ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: Love Before The Counterrevolutionaries Came
thank you
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: 12 Months Later
Wow! I appreciate your time and review so much! Always love the how my writing can connect to others! I'm truly sorry for your loss. I hope writing does the ...
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: 12 Months Later
Thank you so much for sharing your feelings on it! I'm glad managed to create these emotions and share them with others! Also, thank you for locating those minor errors ...
Jan 27, 2016 -
Re: The Shine in the Pavement
Hi, writervid, I enjoyed reading this. You did a nice job with imagery and thoroughly felt it. My only recommendation is to fiddle with punctuation more so you don't use ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: The Shine in the Pavement
Hi, writervid, I enjoyed reading this. You did a nice job with imagery and thoroughly felt it. My only recommendation is to fiddle with punctuation more so you don't use ...
Jan 26, 2016
