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  • Poetry » Realistic, Film Re: I can't see through this blindfold god help me

    I was intrigued just reading the title. You set this piece up wonderfully. I enjoy the ups and downs depicted right from the start. Structurally, the stanzas are not too ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Romantic Re: The Girl Pt. 1

    awe thank you so much! glad it was enjoyable to read! (:

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: emptY

    Thank you for this review! To start, The Shield of Achilles is a reference to the Homer's The Illiad (: Also, you are right in this sense, this poem was ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: As I Look Back In Anger

    Wow. Honestly, I was hooked from the beginning. This is my type of poetry and the emotion you created blossomed beautifully as it progressed. The structure is spread out enough, ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Romantic Re: The Girl

    Hello, thank you for taking the time to review my piece! The capitalization is because I copy and pasted this from my tumblr that I had written on my phone ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Romantic Re: The Girl

    You guessed right! This is just the beginning and when I first came about this idea, I wanted to right a FULL blown novel but for right now I'm just ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Other » Romantic, Romantic Re: Love Before The Counterrevolutionaries Came

    I appreciate all of this! thank you for your time (:

    Feb 1, 2016
  • Other » Literature, Romantic Re: sour

    I have a tumblr with writing if you'd like to check it out on your spare time. It is the same as my name on here, and thank you so ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Other » Literature, Romantic Re: sour

    thank you, thank you! and i totally spaced the font so your suggestion for it is much appreciated!

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: A Different Tomorrow

    Hello, cpedro! I have stumbled across your poem and boy am I glad I did. First, I'm going to start with your structure. I love poems with a nice structure ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Other » Romantic, Romantic Re: Love Before The Counterrevolutionaries Came

    thank you

    Jan 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: 12 Months Later

    Wow! I appreciate your time and review so much! Always love the how my writing can connect to others! I'm truly sorry for your loss. I hope writing does the ...

    Jan 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: 12 Months Later

    Thank you so much for sharing your feelings on it! I'm glad managed to create these emotions and share them with others! Also, thank you for locating those minor errors ...

    Jan 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Shine in the Pavement

    Hi, writervid, I enjoyed reading this. You did a nice job with imagery and thoroughly felt it. My only recommendation is to fiddle with punctuation more so you don't use ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Shine in the Pavement

    Hi, writervid, I enjoyed reading this. You did a nice job with imagery and thoroughly felt it. My only recommendation is to fiddle with punctuation more so you don't use ...

    Jan 26, 2016


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