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Re: "You're an Ugly Little Fatty."
Hello! Firstly, I admire you for speaking up about such important topic with your poem, as it kind of touches us all. You're right about tiny comments changing people's mindsets ...
Jul 23, 2017 -
Re: It's Weird
I love this, maybe I'm overly sensitive to poems like yours since I seriously considered taking my own life many times, but I guess that even if I haven't, I'd ...
Jul 23, 2017 -
Re: windscreen wipers.
I really enjoyed reading this and I especially like that even though it's not the longest, your word choice is pleasant to read. I read this like three times simply ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: She
Hello there! Firstly, as a person who also doesn't have English as their first language, I really appreciate the fact you're trying to write pieces in a language that you ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: gay best friend
So. Damn. True. Fetishizing men's homosexuality is the same as jerking off to lesbian porn, a thing girls usually fight against and get pissed over. The trend of "gay best ...
May 14, 2017 -
Re: That's so gay (Poetry Slam)
This is so well written yet painful to read. Because it's true. The fact you say you don't want to fight for what is right to save yourself at least ...
May 14, 2017 -
Re: You...
Hello, I'm just stopping by to say that I like this a lot, especially how you expressed so many feelings that come with the loss of someone. And I love ...
May 14, 2017 -
Re: eating bubbles
firstly, oh my. secondly, i think i might have found my new favorite poem on this site? i really like how you mix the kind of child-like drip drop drip ...
May 13, 2017 -
Re: Guadalupe The Mosquito
I really like this, especially the way you describe the seemingly not important conflict of a person killing a fly in such an interesting (and dramatic!) way. Guadalupe is in ...
May 13, 2017
