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Hi! there Sherri :) Even though, I'm not into reading suspense & mystery genres I can't help but say that I'm really impressed. Wow. Every detail was thoroughly described that ...

Hi! there Mersize:) This was so cute. Tom & Tyreese's effort to be friends with Seiji and Seiji's leap on breaking the walls that isolate him from the rest. It ...

Hi! there gossipgirlxoxo :) Since I haven't read the former chapter, I was at lost of their current situation. But as I continue reading, slowly I was able to grasp ...

Hi! :) The descriptions were so vivid and the story flowed really well. Hence, I can see pictures in my mind as I continue reading, most especially the physical appearance, ...

Hi! there TheRobster1991 :) This was straightforward and creatively done. Your use of the adjectives and nouns as the characters were very much effective in delivering the message you want ...

Hi! there dawny9791 :) It makes me wonder what kind of game are they playing? Like it has something to do between life and death. Please excuse my lack of ...

Hi! there umaima :) Oh my! It was so funny & entertaining. Her acts on impulse, her embarrassment & their accidental meet-ups—it's just so romantic. I don't have anything to ...

Hi! there Alchemist :) It sure is long but it's entertaining. Which made me read it through the last punctuation mark :wink: Perhaps, because of it's length you had overlooked ...

Hi! there Hamsa :) It must be young love but what if it's true. It's just saddening that they have to go separate ways for the good of everyone. Ow. ...

Hi! there joallover :) This was so good. A lot of questions had been asked, much on the negativities on our society but I really admire the fact that you've ...

Hi! there mawpah :) This reminds me of the saying “One can never know happiness without sadness.” It suddenly popped in my mind. Like in here “You won't fully appreciate ...

Hi! there RavenMoonStone :) .. This chapter was kind off brutal with the all the whipping, dragging and threats. This shows hurt, cover-ups and, a hint of, despair. I just ...

Hi! there Kelpies :) .. Welcome to YWS. I agree with ThereseCricket that it's like a storybook but, nonetheless, it was refreshing. Hence, you also shared to us your talent ...

Hi! and Welcome to YWS Pinkiegirl13 :) .. I see in her a strong girl that inspite of the obstacles that she face at home and with regards to her ...

Hi! there Anees :) .. Welcome to YWS. I like the concept of this story. You can be able to enter a world that “reflects your personality.” Then it feels ...