Young Writers Society

Hi! there topkek :) First off, Welcome to YWS :) This is something unique and, literally and figuratively, creative. Hence, it sure was a Kaleidoscope of Possibilities. I'm hoping that ...

Hi! there BlackhawkUnder :) Before anything else, Welcome to YWS :) You were very descriptive that I visualized the whole scene. Grammar-wise, *claps* it was well-written. The emotions, really, felt ...

Hi! there ShadowPrincess16 & UntamedHearts173 :) The disconnection between Ryder & his mom, throughout this chapter, was well-stated and visualized. Just by reading it, their is not even an ounce ...

Hi! there EnderFlash :) Almost a month delayed but Welcome to YWS :) hooh. yeah. How could I review this? This is personal, and you've mentioned a chat. Hence, conversational. ...

Hi! there TheSilentBagpipe :) First off, I can't grant your request to be harsh. Why? Because of the mere reason that it was a beautiful composition. I, even, actually, had ...

Once again, hi! Renn :) It was over a year since the prologue. But it was as beautifully written as it was. Hence, the descriptive characterization and mood. I still ...

Hi! there Amanda123 :) Welcome to YWS:) Aaaaahhhhhh, seriously I feel giddy. hahaha. Can't wait to read how things would work out for them. As you can read :wink: , ...

Hi! there Satira :) I like your avatar, by the way. Going on to the story, I like it how you described Moh. Enabling us to visualize him, regardless of ...

Hi! there speakerskat :) Aww, I'm smiling all the way while reading it. I really enjoyed this. I find your style & your use of colors & seasons really artistic. ...

Hi! there joallover :) I really like how your poem progressed. From staying in the dark to finding yourself in the light. Hence, you have your way with words. Especially ...

Hi! there AngelaMallari :) Before anything else, Welcome to YWS This story has potential &, perhaps, a scene in a more expanded short story. I would like to know their ...

Hi! there MusicalTheaterGirl17 :) I know, it's days delayed but Welcome to YWS :) I, actually, find this story cute & humorous. Practically, the 2nd paragraph started the fun feel. ...

Hi! there Katiebrownie :) Before anything else, Welcome to YWS :) And *claps* That waaassss beautiful! whoo. Seriously, it had me teary-eyed & I could feel the intensity of his ...

Hi! there RossMac :) I wanted to say, Welcome to YWS :) I felt the pain in your poem. The feeling of being left alone. The feeling of hesitating in ...

Hi! there myjaspercat :) That, really, is procrastination. I think, a lot of us or all of us could relate to that. Hence, you portrayed it really well. From the ...