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I love it ! Absolutely loved this piece ! However, some pointers. You made a few grammatical mistakes. " How will you never understanding that collocation of unspoken weight" The ...

I personally love this! Love because I got a stand up poetry vibe from this. I admire the way you write and how you stick to a rhyme scheme that ...

I couldn't help but love this poem. Love it mainly because I screamed hope. My heart goes out to Haiti. I'm just going to write a brief review. This poem ...

I love this poem. Emphasis on the word, love. I couldn't help but notice every line i read, I related to it. This poem is filled with so much feelings ...

Just a brief review. I really liked the rhyming scheme of it. I can actually see it being a song or a little jingle. Key points you should take note ...

Reading this was a bit of a challenge, mainly because it felt like you jumped from one to the next. You also failed to use commas which played a part ...

Firstly, this was a strongly written piece. However, I think this should have been done in a poem form so that the dramatic effect of it could be felt. "Though, ...

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Firstly, this was a strongly written piece. However, I think this should have been done in a poem form so that the dramatic effect of it could be felt. "Though, ...

This was a beautiful piece. It was indeed a good read. However, I'll just shoot this concern in. The first 2 lines, where you said : “If I had done ...