Hi there LittleNova, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review for The Black Cat Squad!
Just so you know, I will put my overall thought of your poem at the end of this review because I will be reviewing as I read. So...let's get reviewing!
- Baby please don't go
You got to know
Look at me now
I could just say, "wow" -
Okay, so I don't really feel that 'I could just say, "wow"' is really for information. It feels like you kind of put it there to get a rhym in. I feel like this who section could be re done or fixed up to be a bit better.
Okay, overall thought.
Uhh, overall I'd say your poem is all right. I think there's definitely room to improve, but hey, we're all here to learn and get better right? I think a few times you go a bit too off-topic to get in a rhym but because your whole poem isn't a rhym, I think your fine without it. But I liked how you kept a flow up to the few off-topic spots (there was really only one biggish one, which I pointed out) and I hope you keep working at writing!
Keep on writing!
-Gymnast2801 for The Black Cat Squad.
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