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I can feel the power from the get go in this poem. I'm only hoping that this poem is about paintball or something because we wouldn't want real guns involved ...

I hoped this made the spotlight because I really love this poem. I felt at peace in the first stanza. When the second stanza came, I felt tears coming out ...

This looks like a very good start for the story, but I do have things to say when it comes to grammar and punctuation. Read below: town, but the weather ...

I don't know much about this Michael Gove guy, but I love the satire used in this song/poem, but I'm leaning more towards the song aspect of it. I'm only ...

I know there's a story coming into play somewhere, but there's a lot of work that needs to be done before this chapter is considered done. I have a lot ...

This poem breaks my heart because it reminds me of my high school years. Oh, how I hated them sometimes because there are people who say that I'm the worst ...

I feel the same way sometimes. There are some good changes, and there are the bad ones, too. I know how it feel to have your world fall apart when ...

I like how you put this poem in something else's, but I'm confused on what you're trying to portray. I can tell this isn't human just by the narrator talking ...

I feel so cold after reading this. I can imagine myself drowning in the ocean as I'm reading this. That's a good thing because you want your readers to feel ...

This story sounds too short for it's own good. I feel as if there should be more of the story here. That's my opinion, but you don't have to listen ...

This looks like a very good scene to start the play or show off. We are introduced to two interesting characters, and now, I want to know what happens next. ...

I made sure to read this poem as slow as I could because I wanted to read every single word of it. When you say this is going to be ...

I love the details you put into this. It describes how the story's going to go not only for the plot, but for the author's writing style, too. You don't ...

There's a lot of good description here. I just think there's a few choppy moments, and you can fix that will adding punctuation and rewording sentences. I'll show you a ...

There is a great story told in this poem. The rhyming was perfect as I read. I kept up with the beat, which was really good. A good beat means ...