carolinewashere

This was an interesting read. I'm glad you let me know you were posting it. I enjoyed reading it! I like thinking about weird things. Water is another thing, besides ...

I liked this poem... A lot of people tell me to stay away from repetition but it seems to work for you. I totally understood your meaning, which is the ...

This is a great poem! I totally agree with clueless about adding more description. I also wasn't really sure what was going on in the poem. So if you had ...

I really like it! I cant think of anything to critique about it. Totally got the nature and love comparison! good job keep writing!

I really like this. I wasn't really concentrating on anything to critique. I could picture this character sitting on a dock with there toes in the water. I thought it ...

this is interesting start! i cant wait to read more! message me when you have more because i would love to fallow this.

at first I did not really know what it was about. Im still not really sure what its about. But thats okay. I really liked the lines And we never ...

wowza thats a great poem. jeez i must say i cant think of anything bad to say. Maybe just at some parts i wasn't sure what was going on but ...

I thinks it is really good. I liked some parts a wicked lot but then sometimes if felt cliche or like you just skipped over a thought and wrote something ...

i really liked the poem. I imagined alot of yellows, bright greens, and bright oranges when i read it. There isn't much bad to say about. i like it alot

all i can say is......WOW. your great at writing, and with adjectives. this poem is really good. im jealous of your talent!

good poems. i thought they were both a little cheesy and the rhymes were force. but besides that they were good.

i like it alot. its really good. maybe if you broke it into stanzas it would be better? But i really dont know anyway, i like.

liked your poem or song? thought it was a little love-y corny though. besides that it was good great job

i really liked your song. the only thing i have to say is that the use of barn animals to me seemed a little corny. But if you were going ...