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thank you for the feedback

thanks for the comment :)

thanks for the advice

thank you :)

Thanks for the input I'm revamping and reworking most of this story so i'll definitely be taking in some of your suggestions :)

thank you for reviewing I'm currently doing a big edit so this is really helpful I'll be sure to take in some of your suggestions :)

sorry it's late but thanks for the review a appreciate your opinion and will take some of your suggestions when I do my review!

Will do :)

it's a nickname for Demetri sorry for the confusion

Dee fell in love with Grace but he has so much emotional baggage that Grace was worried that she wouldn't be able to cope with her own past. She never ...

Thanks for the review :)

Thanks for the review I'm so happy you liked it I will be sure to edit fairly soon :) and be out with chapter 3 (just in case your interested)

Why thank you for that kind praise!

don't know why it did that