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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Do You Know What It's Like?!

    Hi there, Carla here for a review. This poem is so good. It has so many emotions that are very deep. I really like the rhyming scheme, it is very ...

    Dec 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Alone

    Hi there Carla here for a review. This poem is so short but yet has so many emotions to it. I really like the layout of this poem, it is ...

    Nov 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Spools of black ink ...

    Hi there, Carla here for a review of your poem. Wow, I always love your work but this is truly exceptional. I love the structure of this poem, it is ...

    Oct 11, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: mud aglow

    Hi there, Carla here for a review. Wow. This poem is really good. I really like the rhyming scheme and the layout. When I first saw the title I thought ...

    Oct 11, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Romantic Re: Broken forever...

    Hi there, Carla here for a review of your short story. This poem is so relatable to so many people who have had a crush on somebody who is so ...

    Oct 10, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Thermometer vs Thermostat

    Hi there, Carla here for a review of your poem. Wow. I am amazed my this poem, at first I thought it would be about some kind of science experiment ...

    Oct 10, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: I am not Titanium

    Hi there @Amnesia, it's Carla here to do a review on your poem. I really like the structure of this poem it is odd and unique. The structure, it's not ...

    Oct 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Oh I Am A Teenage Girl

    This poem is so relatable to so many teenage girls, I know this as it relates to me so much. I mostly relate to the bit where it says "My ...

    Oct 4, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: reader/writer

    I am confused is this a poem or not. Like no offense but my definition of a poem is that it has to have some sort of rhyming scheme or ...

    Oct 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Person Against Person

    This poem is so good. It is so true as well. I love how you incorporated modern day stuff that is a big problem in the world. When I saw ...

    Sep 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Worth it (rewrite)

    Aww so many people can relate to this. I have a cousin who has Bipolar. Is this a true story as I can't tell as it is so heart-warming and ...

    Sep 27, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: past our due date

    Aww this is so good. One thing I am a critic for is Capital Letters for every start of a sentence and the I. That is the only suggestion I ...

    Sep 27, 2018
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: The Old Friend

    A lot of people unexpectedly meet an old friend. I remember when I was on the train to London and I met and old friend from primary school. I didn't ...

    Sep 27, 2018
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: The Runaway

    This story relates to me. I sometimes feel like running away from home as well, getting on a train and going somewhere I don't know. The amount of times in ...

    Sep 27, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: *deleted*

    Aww so many people can relate to this. I know how it feels. My dad went to prison for stealing as well. He did get out on bail. It is ...

    Sep 27, 2018


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