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Re: Do You Know What It's Like?!
Hi there, Carla here for a review. This poem is so good. It has so many emotions that are very deep. I really like the rhyming scheme, it is very ...
Dec 12, 2018 -
Re: Alone
Hi there Carla here for a review. This poem is so short but yet has so many emotions to it. I really like the layout of this poem, it is ...
Nov 8, 2018 -
Re: Spools of black ink ...
Hi there, Carla here for a review of your poem. Wow, I always love your work but this is truly exceptional. I love the structure of this poem, it is ...
Oct 11, 2018 -
Re: mud aglow
Hi there, Carla here for a review. Wow. This poem is really good. I really like the rhyming scheme and the layout. When I first saw the title I thought ...
Oct 11, 2018 -
Re: Broken forever...
Hi there, Carla here for a review of your short story. This poem is so relatable to so many people who have had a crush on somebody who is so ...
Oct 10, 2018 -
Re: Thermometer vs Thermostat
Hi there, Carla here for a review of your poem. Wow. I am amazed my this poem, at first I thought it would be about some kind of science experiment ...
Oct 10, 2018 -
Re: I am not Titanium
Hi there @Amnesia, it's Carla here to do a review on your poem. I really like the structure of this poem it is odd and unique. The structure, it's not ...
Oct 9, 2018 -
Re: Oh I Am A Teenage Girl
This poem is so relatable to so many teenage girls, I know this as it relates to me so much. I mostly relate to the bit where it says "My ...
Oct 4, 2018 -
Re: reader/writer
I am confused is this a poem or not. Like no offense but my definition of a poem is that it has to have some sort of rhyming scheme or ...
Oct 2, 2018 -
Re: Person Against Person
This poem is so good. It is so true as well. I love how you incorporated modern day stuff that is a big problem in the world. When I saw ...
Sep 29, 2018 -
Re: Worth it (rewrite)
Aww so many people can relate to this. I have a cousin who has Bipolar. Is this a true story as I can't tell as it is so heart-warming and ...
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: past our due date
Aww this is so good. One thing I am a critic for is Capital Letters for every start of a sentence and the I. That is the only suggestion I ...
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: The Old Friend
A lot of people unexpectedly meet an old friend. I remember when I was on the train to London and I met and old friend from primary school. I didn't ...
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: The Runaway
This story relates to me. I sometimes feel like running away from home as well, getting on a train and going somewhere I don't know. The amount of times in ...
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: *deleted*
Aww so many people can relate to this. I know how it feels. My dad went to prison for stealing as well. He did get out on bail. It is ...
Sep 27, 2018
