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I really liked it! (: Okay, time for the corrections. Philophobia A drop of sweat, a shortness of breath . What have you done to me? The constant feeling of ...

No grammar corrections, just a few things to point out. “In the same alley way ,” the evil candy man said. So, the underlined: alleyway is one word. And the ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Though it is such a strange and difficult subject to talk about, you did it well. Every since the first sentence I realized I love ...

So I really have nothing to say about this. I don't see a message or overall theme, except, of course, for the one depicted in your story. I think maybe ...

Chicago... overwhelming, beautiful city. E verything is new to me it's easy to find color hiding in between the big, gray buildings trying to reach the sky. T here's love ...

The way love moves Proluge "Daddy, daddy!" Six-year-old Aleeyah screamed. She lived with her mother but her dad visited once in a while. Kelly didn't like to see him. Well, ...

This poem was beautiful! Though I was a little thrown off with the variations of line length, I am very glad I read. Your words are very beautiful. The phrases ...

Okay, so there are a few things I would like to say. One, this is all dialogue! You can't have a story with all talk and no description. I don't ...

Hiya! Glad to read this, I love romantic fiction. Here I go: A teenage boy stared at a girl about the same age as him in amazement as her long-fingered ...

Hmm, *wonders what to think of this.* Well, I have to say, for your first post on this site, I congratulate you. Sure, there were some mistakes, but that is ...

Goodness. There are so many things I want to say. Your writing is excellent, and there is nothing I wish to correct. I think the voice of your narration fits ...

So, you are bordering on cliche. I have read all of this once or twice before! I wish you would add some surprise twist. I think I know what's going ...

This is, without doubt, the best chapter so far. I mean, sure you rushed through it so quickly I was scared, but I think at this point, I really know ...

Woah! You caught me off guard there. I mean, you could have fit more things in between the will scene and the wedding, right? I feel like you need to ...

Well, since everyone has talked grammar and nitpicks, I don't know what to do! This poem had perfect punctuation, and I loved it. I really couldn't find anything wrong :D ...