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Hiya! Classy here, let us begin. Nitpickiness: The Deer crouched for a moment and lifted it's head to a branch overhang that creaked from some unseen stress, then, it leapt. ...

It was always interesting staying with Aunt Penelope, so by living with her for a year, I should be able to write a book of all the wacky ideas she ...

Hiya! Classy here to review. Always a few raindrops between friends, This was the only line that that struck me as something I needed to comment on. I really want ...

Okay, for one, McDonalds is way better than Burger King. And so is Wendy's. Burger King's burgers taste like... nothing! Get your facts straight! :) hehe Classy

This poem was very random. I'll try to point out what I mean. in the dark, the fear, So, I don't really like 'the fear' here. I feel you you ...

Hiya! Classy here. This was quite enjoyable, though a bit on the cliche side. And Yet You Still Love heart is a fire,Burning my happiness.Enflaming my joy,Smoldering my head is ...

Classy here! Let us start. But im made to feel like this Should be I'm, or I am. I liked this. I like the little bit of bliblical referance. It ...

Olli! Okay, now that that's over, let us get reviewing! The water flexed it's 'fingers' and lunged for the beaver. She was standing by 'The Weeping River'. So, you use ...

It's me! It's my death! Okay, so in chat I said that I was going to go and review your works because I felt that you would write about me ...

Wow Cres. Wow. He wanted to see one of my pieces of artwork and I told him, I’d email him a picture if he sent me some of his writing. ...

Hiya! Classy here! Let us begin. at four feet tall, he was big- even for his species. This sentence does not make sense, the 'even for his species' part. If ...

Hiya! Classy here! Now that that's over, on to the review. I really like this. You have such a poetic voice. In fact, while I was reading, I was thinking ...

and Impossible going back; And do not let yourself slack. I feel like you're having trouble with this line. The number of syllables just doesn't flow. I would suggest a ...

Hiya, Classy here! Let's see what we can do... Black. Black is the fist which punches Accept it. Accept it and drag your ravaged frame from one day to the ...

Elena sat on a floor of what looked and smelled like some rusty old prison. Moss and decayed wood roamed about, maybe she was in a forest. “Great a forest ...