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captain.classy

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: I little snippet of my story

    Hey there! Classy here for a review. :) The rains had come early to the arid eastern provinces four months out of every twelvemonth the rains poured down in stinging ...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: With you

    Hey! Classy here for a review. So I would just like to point this out to you: With you I want to touch the world Our hands outstretched, gently And ...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: The Obscured (Scene 1)

    Hey! Classy here for a review! I really liked it. I agree with the above. This moves at a great pace. I can see a story unfolding. Are you having ...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Boneyards

    Wow, Pecan, this was amazing. You know when you read pieces and the words seem as if they are actually coming out of a person's lips? Well that's how I ...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Kynbayer - Prologue

    Hey, Classy here. Time for the review. The only group of people not struggling was the Kynsar. So, I'm pretty sure it's "The only group of people not struggling were ...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Dream world 2

    Hey there! Classy here again. Confusion This piece was so much better than your first, but I am seriously confused. I can't make it obvious that I'm leaving him for ...

    Apr 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Dream world 1

    Hey there! Classy here to review. Grammar I'm not one to point out grammar, but I would just like to tell you that a lot of your commas are misplaced ...

    Apr 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Yours Truly (Edited)

    Ugh, sorry this has taken so long. I've been really busy with my magazine and all that... So, pretty much when I read this, all I see it "I love ...

    Mar 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Drop Of Life

    Hey butters! I don't know how I'm going to follow the great reviews above, but I'll try. :) My bones chill and I can smell the coffee on the I ...

    Mar 29, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Drained {Chapter One}

    Another vampire story. I will not talk about the vampire-ness, for the sake of being negative. haha She was just waiting there, for the end. To be killed. She was ...

    Mar 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I will always love you

    This reminds me of a Brother's Grim tale. Short, a little gory, and to the point. I like that line that you had the princess write in the letter. Did ...

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: untitled at the moment

    This is cute, just moving a little too fast. It seems like an interesting idea, but I want to see how they met, how they got to the point that ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Life's Final Flicker

    Hey, Classy here! What I like about this is that you never fully come out and say that this is about a guy and a girl. I mean, you imply ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Sickroom

    I like this, I'm just not so sure about its obviousness. The last line... it is too obvious, too blunt. I don't think she should think that he is automatically ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Can I not be your friend?

    This was very hard to read. Not for the reasons you may assume, just because I was trying to find a purpose or meaning in it. I really liked the ...

    Mar 23, 2010


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