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Re: I little snippet of my story
Hey there! Classy here for a review. :) The rains had come early to the arid eastern provinces four months out of every twelvemonth the rains poured down in stinging ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: With you
Hey! Classy here for a review. So I would just like to point this out to you: With you I want to touch the world Our hands outstretched, gently And ...
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Re: The Obscured (Scene 1)
Hey! Classy here for a review! I really liked it. I agree with the above. This moves at a great pace. I can see a story unfolding. Are you having ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Boneyards
Wow, Pecan, this was amazing. You know when you read pieces and the words seem as if they are actually coming out of a person's lips? Well that's how I ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Kynbayer - Prologue
Hey, Classy here. Time for the review. The only group of people not struggling was the Kynsar. So, I'm pretty sure it's "The only group of people not struggling were ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Dream world 2
Hey there! Classy here again. Confusion This piece was so much better than your first, but I am seriously confused. I can't make it obvious that I'm leaving him for ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Dream world 1
Hey there! Classy here to review. Grammar I'm not one to point out grammar, but I would just like to tell you that a lot of your commas are misplaced ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Yours Truly (Edited)
Ugh, sorry this has taken so long. I've been really busy with my magazine and all that... So, pretty much when I read this, all I see it "I love ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: A Drop Of Life
Hey butters! I don't know how I'm going to follow the great reviews above, but I'll try. :) My bones chill and I can smell the coffee on the I ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Drained {Chapter One}
Another vampire story. I will not talk about the vampire-ness, for the sake of being negative. haha She was just waiting there, for the end. To be killed. She was ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: I will always love you
This reminds me of a Brother's Grim tale. Short, a little gory, and to the point. I like that line that you had the princess write in the letter. Did ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: untitled at the moment
This is cute, just moving a little too fast. It seems like an interesting idea, but I want to see how they met, how they got to the point that ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Life's Final Flicker
Hey, Classy here! What I like about this is that you never fully come out and say that this is about a guy and a girl. I mean, you imply ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Sickroom
I like this, I'm just not so sure about its obviousness. The last line... it is too obvious, too blunt. I don't think she should think that he is automatically ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Can I not be your friend?
This was very hard to read. Not for the reasons you may assume, just because I was trying to find a purpose or meaning in it. I really liked the ...
Mar 23, 2010
