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Re: Believe
Wow I love this SO SO SO SO much! It's the best poem I've read all day and I've read eleven poems today and reveiwed them all. So tired. But, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Mercy
OMG. This is so sad. It can't be for real. Is it? Oh my gosh. Well, anyway to the reveiw. I thouht this poem was very moving and tragic. Sorry ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: **Haven't really thought of a title**
OK, here's the deal. So, first of all I liked this poem. I was well written, with a rhyme that was hidden and added to the hyme, like flow of ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Shimmer
OK, first I have to say you've got a really unique poem here. I'd made me sad and confused. The rhyme and rhythme was really good, but, sorry to say, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Today's Poem: Underworld
I simply love this poem! It totally changed my outlook on what the underw rold is like. I didn't completely understand it, but the parts that I did understand, I ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Where I sit
Ok, here is a great, great poem that is warm and fun and makes me smile. So, first of all I am going to have to say that I am ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Storm
OK, great poem you got here. I just have to say a few things about it. First, don't cdenter it. Put it to the side like the copied one I ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Aftermath
Hey. First of all, I really liked this. It was so precise and captured the agony you felt in every word. The words were well chosen to fit the topic ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Breaking Free
First of all, sorry to say I had absolutly no idea what you were talking about. I'm probably just clueless but maybe you could put some more details for the ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: In a crowd full of faces
So sad! The rhyme was really good! So good that I didn't even notice it until halfway through! It flowed well. All I can say is... maybe add a line ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Sunset
OK, first of all I apoligize if I put the wrong breaks in the lines on your poem. And, no, I don't thinkit was cheesy. It was nice, simple and ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: God's Gift
Hmm... I really like this concept. You had great descriptions and a wonderful idea behind the story. But, I have to say I was a little confused by the way ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: The Storm
WOAH!!!!! That was truly amazing! I loved the conversation format and I thought it worked well. The two men each had a voice, one who repeated everything the other said ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: My worst friend. My best enemy.
Ohhhhhh! Is it true? The same thing happened to me in 4th grade! I thought it was really well-written and I loved the short, snappy, too-the-point lines. But, note about ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Awww....This is sad. :-( Well, i'm not sure if you meant for the mood of it to be sad or angry, but it seemed like a little of both. It ...
Jun 24, 2011
