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Thankyou :)

I am so happy that someone agrees and understands. I am Mormon, so I feel obligated. It gets confusing sometimes.

You know after reading this, I see that my rhyming is askew. Definitely something I need to work on.

This has so much emotion pact into so little. Amazing. That is all I have to say.I love it.

Hahaha thankyou and no problem :)

I loved the poem, and I like how there us so much you.can pull from it. I think That I would prefer you may have rhymed more, but other that ...

I love how this poem has so much meaning through something so simple. Keep up the good work.

Thanks :)

I am just reading these. I have not been able to get on in a while. Thankyou soo much xD

hahaha yes. i guess it didnt save the last edited version. sorry bout tht!! ill submot the edited version again. but thanks :) and yes that is what i was ...

i love the feeling in it. it has a mystical, almost a feeling of being alive. it makes me feel like running :) very good job.

this brough a tear to my eye. keep writing

very well done :)

hahaha this is very funny. you do well when writing humor, so i tell just after reading this. i am getting your point of view as well. keep going :)