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**giggles** I thought you were talking about me for a minute there XD Will review later if I get a chance. Looks interesting! (sorry this isnt more helpful, slightly on ...

I've read approx. 21 I think. And I think I used to read the Oz series too, but I cant remember. My favourites are GWTW and all three books by ...

LMAO XD Very funny stuff :D

Muahahahahahahah...haha..hahhahah... **wanders off, wiping tears of laughter from eyes and hiccupping in a generally amused fashion** PAT BUCHANAN!

Hi guys, Thanks for your posts :) carelessaussie -- thanks for the compliments lol. I agree the ending is a little sharp, so I'll work on it, but like you ...

**blush** Thanks wiggy :D I really appreciate the crit on this one and have adopted your suggestions - they do help the flow a lot :) I'm not sure about ...

I...o_o I think I like this. It was kind of pessimistic but it sums up the way I feel about life sometimes. So...yeah. Sorry I cant be more helpful, LOL.

I'm an Arty fan too, LOL. I collect Colfer signed firsts so maybe that has something to do with it, but really I just love the stories ^_^

Hahahahaa. You should put this in "Writing Activities" maybe, and we can all add a couple of lines or something :lol: Very funny.

Wow. I dont have time to give a full crit right now, but I just wanted to say this gave me the shivers. Powerful stuff :) I loved it.

**shrugs** Well I guess that one went whooshing straight over my head, LOL, since I have no idea who Prince is. Sorry!

Thanks guys, I appreciate the encouragement :)

Thanks Harpz :)

I guess that's encouraging, LOL. Will look forward to your crit, xanthan :).

OK, it works better now. There are a few lines which still strike me as awkward, mostly because of their structure: Who came to sit by his side? Who else? ...