bubblewrapped

Thanks for the crits, guys. Any better with the italics and third stanza gone?

I'm sorry, but I have to agree. Fix the spelling, grammatical and spacing errors and then I might be able to understand it well enough to give you a proper ...

J C Belding; While I appreciate the sentiment behind it, the poem itself is too bald for my taste.

I read this years and years ago so cant really remember much about it, except for the ending and the fact that it is one of the saddest books I've ...

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I'm cant remember that well. Something about a flea, I think o_0 I'm sure it was very symbolic, LOL.

:smt107 :smt049 :smt049 In case you havent guessed, I really love this piece. I heard it won the competition so I figured I'd check it out - boy am I ...

LOL I didn’t know you’d written this for the fairytale/myth contest. You neglected to mention that part so you can hardly object that I didn’t read it with that in ...

Loving the hidden messages ^_^ I'm the only Potter fan in the house and it's driving me crazy that I cant talk about it LOL. [spoiler]Fred's death was the one ...

LOL I just saw this. Congrats on your grade, Jig! I cant believe I didnt see the connection between eye = world -_- I guess I was just too focused ...

OK, here's the second half. Enjoy :D Stop, the rational side of him demanded. He's fine, but he is up the mountain. Did you really expect cell phone reception up ...

OMG. Sorry Snoink! I only just reread what I wrote and god am I glad I'm no longer...how old was I? Anyway. Sorry! Talk about b****y LMAO O_O Thanks for ...

....I'm glad I dont take physics XD Seriously though...how does one pronounce ∫F•ds?

Weird. But somehow entrancing. I dont think it suits poetry really; it reads better as a song.

Thanks Imp! I only just read your crit **blushes** I was looking through some of my old work and decided to touch up a couple of the areas you mentioned; ...