bubblewrapped

Mmm. Well, to be totally honest, it felt kind of repetitive to me. Its good, no doubt about that- I like your tone and the flow is competently handled, just ...

A vague sense of understanding is emerging in my mind, I think. I couldnt tell you what it was about exactly but I love the pictures you create and I'm ...

Firestarter! Hello! I see you've become quite the poet in my absence... My overall impression of this poem is, for starters, WOW. And then again, WOW. It glitters. Its pretty ...

I confess I'm struck dumb. Mostly by the disconcerting similarities between myself and said 'poetboy' LOL, but also because of the way you have expressed yourself so eloquently. Its impressive, ...

This was an interesting poem, particularly because I felt - at least in the beginning - that I could kind of relate to what you were saying. However! As you ...

I have to admit I hated most of it. No offense, but it was just...there wasnt enough depth for my taste. The concept is good, but it lacks poetic grace. ...

Have to say I agree, Incandescence. Another impressive poem. Kudos :) here is where the words get heavy and the meanings complex because all the little boys and their casanova ...

Well C&G you're in luck, because I certainly can tell you exactly what I like and dislike, LOL ;) She was lost at the bottom of her bed - her ...

I have to admit, I almost stopped reading. There is no life in this poem until the third verse or so, and it just didnt seem worth the effort at ...

I like this poem. I think it has a sweetness to it that many poems lack. Do you remember when we used to play limbs intertwined one person two heads? ...

Far be it for me to discourage you, but to be honest, I wasnt that thrilled with either poem. Granted, this is only my opinion and dont let it deter ...

I loved it. Seriously, it was beautiful and well written, and I love your imagery. There isnt anything I can find to critique really, although I do agree with Incandescence ...

With a wee bit of work this could be an awesome poem. I never knew When I had you close How lucky I really was I reckon this should read ...

I liked it. It was kind of...lyrical, lol which is why its in lyric poetry, obviously. I need to find that theasaurus. Anyway, you probably will look back and find ...

Have to reiterate here - WOW. LOL. Its great. I had some problems with the flow the first time I read it, but then, sometimes it takes me a little ...