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I'm absolutely in love with this!!! This is so creative and I wouldn't have thought of a better way to put it and I like how instead of just coming ...

I had to read this a few times to fully understand the meaning and i think i understand. It is very good though once I understood. I especially like, "My ...

Thank you for the suggestions I'll keep them in mind next time I write:)

I understand a deep connection with this and so I applaud you. This is very good and I think that many people can relate to it. Some typing needs attention ...

Thank you!

I loved this, but you could always make it or longer or put more emotion into it. The scheme in it is good too. If u were to not rhyme ...

I loved this!! I can't wait till you continue it.