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Thank you so much for the review. I'm not exactly sure what prompted me to write about this but I believe it was mainly just a random work. When posting ...

hey! Thank you so much for the review; the capitalization of the "I"'s were actually a chosen formatting choice. I chose to do this because it directed a certain attention ...

You seem to have a natural voice in writing; I really enjoy your verbalization of such a sensitive selection of feelings. Personification was used well in a very subtle way ...

The piece as is, is currently about being in a relationship with a brokenhearted person. He claimed to have been over his ex but continued to talk about her; she ...

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate you feed back along with hearing your perspective on the piece (which was close to spot on by the way). ...

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You seem to have a natural voice in writing; I really enjoy your verbalization of such a sensitive selection of feelings. Personification was used well in a very subtle way ...

You seem to have a natural voice in writing; I really enjoy your verbalization of such a sensitive selection of feelings. Personification was used well in a very subtle way ...

You seem to have a natural voice in writing; I really enjoy your verbalization of such a sensitive selection of feelings. Personification was used well in a very subtle way ...

I really like the way this is written. Some parts may be improved by revising your use of plurals, such as in the line, "No resolve." This may be changed ...